Bltimate Bcheming Bystem

LV 5

Liu_OAPS

It was an interesting story. I like how it can be up to your imagination on how the story goes, but I feel like editing what you imagine is tiring. I also didn’t understand what was the first chapters title, but overall it was pretty good. I felt that it was too based on the novel “The Ultimate Scheming System”, but I feel this should continue, as the novel “The Ultimate Scheming System,” has just recently started up again after being dead for almost half a year. Hope the Author keep up the good work! 👍

LV 6

LokiJoker

hurl......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 13

vsm9959

Don’t waste your time ———————————————————————)(-:+;&($’,xmfhchkx,dmchchjksksihdh&$kwmnfhkk)4jx(a,ksjfhfnxjjxmemxjn(4)3’c($js,LSU)#)($(&)#’,djrhfhdiksmejfhfjskksjfnmc,s