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At four years old, Izuku Yagi is diagnosed as quirkless while his twin sister Izumi has powerful telekinesis. It is also when he's four years old that his parents start to forget about him.
But that won't stop him from achieving his dream of becoming a hero.
Nothing will.
Not being forgotten by his parents.
Not being beat by his sister and childhood friend near daily.
After all, All Might says that anyone can be a hero.
"It's nice to have a dream, but keep it realistic."
Abandoned once again, this time with his dream crushed, he takes his childhood friend's advice. 'Take a swan dive off the roof and pray for a quirk in your next life!'
The only problem? It doesn't work.
Now. How will the audience react?
(The cover is not mine. I obviously do not claim rights to BNHA.)
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love your books guys more chapter please the story is good MORE CHAPTER MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREEEEE CHAPTER PLEASEEER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Its interesting never seen anyone do this before. I like it an am looking forward to the rest, so please continue writing this
Loving it already haven't seen one that has the characters react to the AU its beautiful and hope you continue it
For some reason the author decided to have a SSSniperwolf type audience that disrupts the entire flow of the story, it feels like he added it just to have extra words per chapter or something. Some god gets thrown into the mix which, huh? when has a god ever been a thing in MHA, his presence actively makes the entire story worse, just have it as one POV, Izuku's, we don't need you to explain everything that's happening to us, we aren't toddlers.
It's a genius idea to point out Deku's bullied past and how it can possibly turn out, Satisfactory lvl of bring out a char's mental struggle and it was pretty enjoyable and the fact that all canon chars are seeing what's being played out is a form of amusement as well
Nice story, having a darker twist to a sunny personality is realy nice. Can´t wait to know how the story goes and how it developes
Hey mate, I’m loving this book so far. My only real gripe is the update schedule being so slow, lol. I especially love what you’re doing with Midoriya’s traumas and familial relationships. It makes him seem so much more real; watching him struggle with his emotional turmoil regarding his sister. Also, I’m just IzuToga trash in general so that’s a win. Lol. TLDR: MC is complex, book is funny, and the relationships are cute. Amazing job.
This would be a 5 if there was no commentary and i would have given this a 3 if the commentary continued on but thankfully the author finally removed it or completely forgot about it at chapter 25 and so this got a 4 in the end
I wish rich people animated good fanfics... you know how they did Dragonball GT but it ain't canon? if I was a Billionaire I'd pick a good fanfic to animate, pay for the rights to use the stories and characters... would it be a good investment? nahh but it sure beats cringe videos on YT and Tiktok rn
the writing is pretty good its made me feel something which makes it better than a lot of books seems pretty stable 1 chapter every week wish it was more though story is pretty good and I am a sucker for a good hero turned villan fan fic character design is something the novel excels at with the audience from the first universe and the characters from the second and since its a fanfic the world background is already pretty good but its also made a lot better with the added supernatural elements so overall a good story!
A very fun and interesting my hero academia fan-fic the stories is really good without much gramatical error from what i can tell(english isn't my first language) really wanting for more
The beginning, the story thrusts some God into the mix, showcasing different realities, saying how cool it is, In reality it has absolutely zero relevance to the actual plot of the universe it's set in, It's nothing but a cheap gimmick to fill each chapter with dumb reactions from the characters. They stand around and comment on the appearance of some random character? "He's cute, he's unmanly" If the story centered around a strong and intelligent female protagonist, it might have been salvageable, But no, we get stuck on her brother a carbon copy of Midoriya, and some shy female side characters. And surprise, surprise, the protagonists are children just like any other fanfic. You have to go through a hundred chapters before they begin to grow up, and even then, they remain gullible heroes, The story is populated with characters, with names like "Izuko, Izumi, Mizuko, Katsuki, Itsuki," that trying to keep track of who's who becomes a chore, and honestly, I couldn't care about any of them, The transitions between the main story and these random realities are so poorly that is impossible to even tell when it's happening, There's absolutely nothing new or unique about this, since the plot itself is a rewrite of another, with the only addition being a character who starts off as bullied, but wants to pretend he is smart and can 'analyze' the heroes because he watches TV, but inevitably ends up becoming hero without a quirk using the power of friendship or some stuff like that. It's clear that the two main characters won't be good, subjected to endless chapters, and filler reaction level storyline.