Carl the Jumper (Original)

It’s pretty decent, lots of words per chapter but it feels super rushed. Like it’ll just speedrun through events and dialogue happens a lot but most of the time it’s just “we talked” instead of actually showing at least a snippet of the conversation. I also found it profoundly boring, and majority of the time I’d be reading 12 seconds in then I’d get off to go do something else. Also every girl he dates seems to just be okay with his huge harem going on, then again I could be wrong because I usually skip over a lot of non-important stuff that I thought was too boring to read and I even skipped entire chapters at a time. Pretty good grammar though. There’s also the fact that the MC isn’t a straight up retard, but because of that a lot of conflict ends up being super anticlimactic and once again really boring. I find going through the 75+ page chapters to be an absolute slog. This might be harem trash, but it’s a lot better in quality than some of the other stuff I’ve seen here. But overall I don’t really find myself super hyped about the next chapter for this fic like I do some of the other ones here, which is a shame since it has so much potential given how much is in each chapter.