Cheating gamer in Pokémon world

The idea is good. There are a few mistakes but it Doesn’t interfere with reading experience.the plot has a lot of potential too.im a fan of gamer fanfics so do keep up and don’t drop in the middle lease.

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Silentfairy

I’ll shamelessly give 5 stars to my work. Good or bad i will let you all decide but i gotta give myself a pat in the back for the work done. I want to write a novel however i dont have much experience in this work.so im writing this as a probe to test myself. I welcome any constructive criticism and advice. I hope to get help from experienced readers and writers to better myself.thank you.

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Immortal_Orca

So far it's a pretty good read there's alot of cool ideas you've incorporated into the novel but I feel like some were added just as an afterthought which while not a bad thing, makes them seem underutilized. In terms of writing quality the beginning of the novel was pretty shaky honestly, however there is a stark contrast between chapter 1 and chapter 10 as the quality made a huge jump so you're improving very quickly. As for the characters themselves, it's a bit early to tell but I feel like I can at least get the general feeling of how you want to portray them which is a good start. I don't really know what more to write but in conclusion, although the novel had a shaky start, I think you're very quickly improving your writing and it really shows, keep it up!

This is an interesting story and fun to read! I love how you develop the pokemons characters. They don't seem like unintelligent pets like other ff.