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Every fanfic I’ve tried to make are inserted on different volumes, so when it updates you (the reader) have to find which volume (which is the fanfic) was updated.
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I'll just say this and put this up in the review section but please ignore the previous reviews since I erased the past chapters. Also, yeah don't give reviews to this fanfic and if you by chance read the reviews then please expect one of the worst fanfic you have read. ( ^ ^ ) Even I don't expect much but I'll do my somewhat best to give you guys an information dump that'll explode your heads up. ( x . x )
Read until the first arc is over everything is explained why he is the way he is and why he ignores his mothers death geez. Another thing is the storys good but it could use more character progression the characters do come off as rather shallow I do get its a fanfic so we all know the characters he's talking about but what about the mc he is very shallow as far as who he is
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Honestly this is a good story UNTIL CHAPTER 4. After chapter 4 the story goes down alot, I mean his mother died then what did he do? NOTHING! I'll accept it if he just transmigated in that world in the time just before his mother's death, but HE GOT FREAKING REBORN IN THAT WORLD! HE GOT TAKEN CARE OF BY HIS MOTHER FROM BABY TILL HE IS 15 YEARS OLD AND WHAT THE F**K DID HE DO? NOTHING HE DOESN'T EVEN SEARCH ON WHO KILL HIS MOTHER, IT'S LIKE HE DOESN'T APPRECIATE ON WHAT HIS MOTHER DID FOR HIM AFTER ALL SHE RAISE HIM AS SINGLE MOTHER AND DID HE REPAY IT? F**K HE DIDN'T WHICH MEANS HE F**KING DOESN'T CARE ABOUT HIS MOTHER, AND WHAT'S MORE HE JUST FREAKING DIVULGE HIS SELF-CREATED SPELL IN JUST A MATTER OF DAYS BEFRIENDING THE MAIN CAST, I MEAN WHAT THE HECK? WHY THE F**K DIVULGE YOUR SELF-CREATED SPELL THAT CAN BE USED AS A TRUMP CARD. YOUR MC IS A F**KING UNGRATEFUL.
Even though the start of the story was great or should i say one of the best but you are going way too fast with the progression of the story regarding friends circle and also exposed almost all of his spells and their characteristics. Even though MC knows the development of the plot of Irregular at magic HS , why does always pokes his nose into the affairs of his friends while knowing tatsuya can handle it better. Main point is why don’t you build their friendship a little slower.
I really like this novel it seems to be going in a great direction the mc you created is also great i look forward to the future of this fanfic adkljfadklfjakldfjakldfjlakfjadklfajdsklfjadslkfajdslk;fajslfk;ajdfkl;adsjflkadjfdsakl;fjad;lkfjadl;kfjadflkjadfkl;adjl;adk;alkdfkjla;djklfa;fd
I rarelly give novel 1 star.. But this novel really make me angry.. Everything is good at the start.. But idk why the author choose to kill his mom.. then thats it.. the mc only cry for one day.. then do nothing.. just like wtf man.. she is your mother.. and she died.. killed.. not a fucking normal die because of old age or something.. but killed.. she fucking killed.. 😑 After that he go to other world.. and the author just simpily say that the mother is only an illusion.. a fucking illusion.. i bet the author is forget about the mother.. and after got so many comment about the mother.. he decided to say that.. wth!!!! 😑 Alright moving on.. i try to read again hopefully its getting better in 2nd world.. Yeah everything is good at the start.. again.. good at the start.. the mc have "real"familly now and look happy.. he even got a girlfriend.. buuuuuuuttttttttt...... The author got bored and decide to move to other world suddenly.. its like you watch anime episode 1.. 2.. 3.. then suddenly its episode 24 or more.. wtf man.. And the author dont know how to ask the mc gf to go to otherworld with the mc.. so he just make the gf is otherworlder too.. its just like WTTTFFFFFF.. The mc is leaving his familly behind too.. the familly that he ask the system to have.. and booomm now i dont need you.. bye bye.. 😑 I want to know what the reason author do that again.. And for author.. pleasee i really hope that you think ahead before writing.. please dont end it suddenly becausw you are bored.. its show you didnt think anything at all before writing it.. atleast plan few chapter ahead.. or the big plot.. how you want your story going and so on.. not like this.. add this and that and destroying the story.. 😑