CONQUER : Dimensional chat group

LV 4

NEETsemsalvasao

seriously does not have to speak the story is horrible for sure the auto was stoned when he wrote, it looks like the diary of the grandfather of the endou of inazuma eleven.  

LV 4

Thecircleof07

Question the work on the Mc really exists or it is fictitious because I found nothing on the internet either on the character or the work????

LV 12

UchihaGod

that's trash , Backstory of the mc is confusing ,it's supposed to be comedy but it's not funny and the description of the mc is trash and all we know about his backstory is that he ' s the son of the demon king ,in his past life his wife had a child with another man (ntr)and that she is a bitch and addicted to power.That is mother is crazy overpowered.

LV 3

iLustForSleep

It's good and all but this is going too fast. One moment they're invited to an unknown chat group. Next, they find out they're actually just work of fictions and that there are multiple dimension. Next, they just reveal their true name, not suspicious if it's a work of an enemy. And then the mc casually asks for some chakra ****, for no reason at all. They're just chatting and BOOM, the mc asks for **** out of nowhere, no build up at all. He doesn't state why he needs them and what he would use it for, maybe he'll use it for evil or good. Also, they are taking this in too fast. They're like "Oh, I'm actually not real and millions of people know all about my personal history, dreams, and future? Okay, that's cool, nice to meet you.". They are not the least shaken at all. But this novel is still at it's development stage and you can better yourself in future chapters. Adios.

LV 14

sweet_killer

oioooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

one of the worst stories 🤣 It was necessary to add more elements of bleach and Cultivation. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

LV 1

Iriyasu_kusabaefu

author! This book is amazing, looking forward to the next chapters! (Vvvvvvvvv:vvvvv:vvvvvv:vvvvvvv::vvvvvvvvbvvvvvvvvvvbvvbvbvvvvfxvgvfhfhdhbgehhvfdgbvdfgbdth) fffffffcfffffggfffftgffffffftffffffffttyyygyyyygtyftfhhufghhyfjhfhufcgyfgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggfgf. 140+

LV 3

Uriel_et_teneberis

Shameless author club hahahaahahahahahahaahahahahahaahahahahahahahaahahahahahahshaahahahahahaahahahahahahaahahahahahahaahahahahahahahahah. I need a life

LV 3

Maxwell_Domingos

ta muito bom[img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp]👏👏👍