COPYCAT

LV 4

OnizukaShinu

Shameless author review. The plot is a really planned one. Do note that I’m still 14 years old and therefore busy with school, so I can’t upload consistently. Every chapters is average 1.2k words. My writing quality is the main thing I want to improve for the time being. That’s why I want you all to write a critic about my grammar or choices of words or my descriptive texts and dialogues, I know that there’s at least 20 faults and it would be greatly valued, if you write a critic. Thank you. Enjoy!

LV 3

The_little_boy

This novel is seriously nice and original unlike some other novels I know. The idea for the plot, the synopsis and the world building was seriously top notch. I will put it into more simpler terms this novel is amazing. However, like every other novel, the author made some mistakes. And that is adding too much of descriptions and a few grammatical errors

LV 3

steph_pesi

I enjoyed the book a lot. Even if the protagonist comes off as rude and proud, but I'm guessing the author was going for that when he was talking in his head. Overall it's a good book. Personally I feel that there are some things that shouldn't be written so much. It takes away the mystery. Keep writing author.

LV 2

Gaasuja

My first issue is the title which is far from catchy. Then, secondly, why do you have to explain the physical character at the end of the chapter? I think it's better to integrate it in the narrative. However, despite all that, the author is quite successful in describing the power of mc's videographic memory. Especially the way he uses it. It's so cool. And lastly, I hope there will be a lot of interesting intrigue in this story.

LV 2

Micaol

I think you have a good book going here, the character is decently op, he's got a relatable backstory and the setting is just right. The fighting is pretty intense, I can tell you have a love of martial arts from it. I'd say you gotta keep writing, however, you gotta pace the story, make it flow with the reader, and work on the book's grammar, otherwise, you have got a great story!

LV 5

Apprentice4

So, I'll divide this review in pros and cons. Pros: -Author has an interesting concept going for him, especially in terms of MCs power and his hidden identity. it would simultaneously make a great slice of life and action novel -The familiar school setting makes it easier to relate to -It's worth it to pass time, especially when it's hard to predict the happenings Cons -The author's perspective is inconsistent, some lines are written in the past while some in the present, some active and some passive, though nothing that good editing can't fix. -The choice of words could also have been better but again that'll automatically get better with time. What's important here is keep experimenting, keep doing new things with it, try to create something completely original. As for the problems with language, they'll get better with time. All the best!