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After dying in an accident in Earth, Mo Feng, the travel enthusiast, had his soul transferred to an young boy with the same name in another world and became the Longfeng Country Red Mountain City Mo Family Eldest Young Master.
Even though he suffered grievous injuries when he woke up and unable to cultivate, no need to worry about it, he has a Divine Cultivation System in his sea of consciousness and he can cultivate freely and reach the apex of the world.
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Hi everyone, This is your author here. I love system novels and cultivation type novels, so writing a novel combining both of my interest. I hope you all like it too. Leave some reviews so thart I can better understand in what way I can improve. Thank you!!!
The novel is enjoyable. The plot is interesting and bit different from other system novels I have read. Writing can be done better. Please work on it. Overall I had fun reading so far!!!
Good system novel! Well written (only a few errors) and it flows well. I thought it was going to be something terrible and I was completely wrong. It has its original points to it and I’m liking it so far. Definitely worth a read.
Story is developing well so far...... A bit slow compared to rest of the system novels out there...... Nothingmuc can be said from so few chapters..... Will wait and see how it is developing......
F*ck what a useless system.....can't even suppress a measly bloodline and cant just the system buy a teleportation talisman why o why so uselss.
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Simply generic, there are not many things you can expect. It would've been better if the mc was evil which is quite rare, unfortunately, the mc is similar to those mc's in generic novels. Meanwhile, the plot is **** too. It's like Martial God Asura. Missing Parents..Cultivating Hard....Got Schemed...Manage to overcome by strength....and repeat. I think only those who are still new or aren't picky would like this novel. That's it!,.
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This could actually be great! It uses the cliched sorry lives but it's still somewhat interesting which is a lot with all the available novels. I just need this to be edited. This may be slightly better than MTL, however it is infuriating to read
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Good novel Love the system but i was hopping the system to only reward him with missions he complete and not have a store where he can also buy anything he wants and dont need like other system novels But overall still a good read Please get him a body cultivation techniques in the future Also no harem please
Story is good. Little predictable but also enjoyable. Has potential but need improvements in language and story a bit. I hope you don't drop this story too like the previous one.
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Interesting!!! It started like a general system novel but turned interesting after a while. Though i feel some parts unnecessary. Long explanations can be shortened. And interaction with the system can be improved.
Feel good novel with MC with action at times and doing some mundane things at times which gave a good balance to the story... I will follow the story.. All the best machi!
Much better than your first book with more substance and plots in this story. Language still can be improved. Though I wish you continue the other book too.
Read for fun... but surprised by the story development... Intersting plot... Wish the chapters are little longer though... Keep up the good work...
Like plot development and the story is decent Like it... Like it... Like it... Like it... Like it... Like it... Like it... Like it... Like it... Like it.
This is finger painting levels of writing. Imagine every bad, overused and stale cliché you can come up with, and I assure you they will be in this story. The character interactions and dialogue feels like everyone are immature, overacting 10 year olds. The writing itself tends to repeat itself and leave absolutely no subtlety, treating the readers like morons. The system is uninteresting and just an easy plot device to give stuff to the MC. Grammar is bearable, but still needs a lot of work. You obviously didn't prepare at all before you started writing, and it shows. A writer who doesn't care about his quality, yet posts it for others to read... why bother? Waste of time for everyone involved.