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in a new world where martial cultivation is everything...
what will our protagist bo Cheng do when he finds out at his awakening ceremony on his 5th that he has no talent for cultivation.
*new author,would appreciate good sugetions or constructive critsm on how I can improv my work.
*not the drawer of the book imige if you are please let me know and I'll take it down.
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for this I'm going to start from the synopsis. We need to start with the description. It is lacking n detail but carries a minor spoiler. then we have the spelling errors which makes it harder to read and understand what you mean. next we have spacing errors that make it seem messy and we need to correct as we read making it even harder. I didn't get past the first chapter to give more advice