Danmachi: True Demon

LV 3

alah_raijin

The start is very interesting and have a lot of potencial

LV 4

ItIswhatItIs

pls continue..……...”:::::::''''''::"::*:*:*:"&#-#!#+#(#!$;$-$8393+3;#-$7$83(3;$-$83+#;$-#82+#-#-38#!$$7373;$-$6383!$I+#;#-#83!-##6#+(#:#-#8#

LV 2

Deus_Night

trop bien. trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.trop bien.

LV 3

ReMormius

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LV 1

Seraph1m

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LV 14

stinkclaw

I love what you doing with the story I hope see a lot of it keep coming. The only advice I have is to pull back on the overpowerness of the mc a little. as struggle makes for good writing. if you already planed for that perfect.