Danmachi: Wolf of Orario

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Sabaroth_zarkiel

Hello author I wanted to know if there is lemons in this novel? Harem recommendation :Artemis, Athena, Freya, hephaestus, ryuu lion, mikoto yamato, hestia, female bell, haruhime, ais, alfia, riveria, lily

LV 4

Miki_Marlo75

The story doesn't even begin but it leaves a lot to be desired, there are only a couple of character introductions, a little background and the introduction to a family so far I see a lot of filler with the theme of unnecessary jokes that are not funny at all, the story itself has a lot to improve

LV 4

Maluop

Story is amazing but there’s so many quotes from Naruto, DC and other seires that it makes it difficult to tell if he’s reincarnated or the original character

LV 4

Garland

The idea for the story is interesting but the execution is very lacking. The voice in his head is never explained, it just happens and even if Bete knows it, it's never given much of an explanation. Is it someone from Earth who resides within Bete's mind or what? Maybe because Bete reference's earth things that shouldn't make sense in Orario but we never really get to it. This overall make's Bete's perspective very confusing and just feel out of place sometimes. If your story centered on having someone from Earth who knows Danmachi reside within Bete's mind and talking to him, the overall execution could have been done much better. Also, i don't really like the quotes and references to other form of media. It's not even funny and it comes off as very strange and just removes the feel of the reading. It's just being said by the other character which doesn't make sense.