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A soul with no past, was selected as the next Multiverse Monarch.....,.
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1st world: Danmachi
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I don't own anything except the OCs .
And English is not my first language .
Hope you all will like it.
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finally a danmachi fic thats not with hestia or hepeastus familia and the most important thing is its not with bell or babysitting him finally a danmachi fic thats not with hestia or hepeastus familia and the most important thing is its not with bell or babysitting him
This story is honestly amazing i like how you make the system not all quest and he needs to train cuz I'm extremely bored with system that just controls the player and gives a ton of quest and it's a lot realistic cuz sometimes they make the items so cheap that it's laughable and you could make a inosuke template at season 1 max and then maybe after maxing it out you can make it that you need more points to upgrade it to like entertainment district arc inosuke this could also be used for other characters like Goku and it would start at kid Goku then teen Goku the Saiyan saga but it would be extremely from kid to teen etc
white hair, check. red eyes, check. system with a separate lifeform (aka personality), check. ok bye no thank you delete this + ratio + who asked + this is getting old I should take another month long break from these cliche fanfics ..............................................................................................................................................................................
I'm sorry I couldn't read it to where it is, I don't like that the system in the episodes has a conscience, although this point is explained, it irritates me how it explains things being that it knows about the situation of the mc, the mc, and its attitude is quite silly and I do not like it.
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Honestly, it's not bad but has a lot of problems... and many choices that can make readers dislike it or hate it, writing quality is a solid 3 few grammar mistakes but the character interactions feels like everything is robotic/feels unnatural , world background is unknown I mean it's in danmachi but what year or maybe I missed it.
author said they are taking a break cause they have a lot of homework for the winter but hasn't updated for 8 months which is kinda sad I liked this
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Esta historia hasta el momento esta realmente interesante, lo รบnico que pido es que si bien no baje la cabeza ante nadie al ser intimidado. Tampoco lo hagas un idiota arrogante. Estarรฉ esperando prรณximos capรญtulos. Gracias por el trabajo
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My opinion the MC is childish he glare at ottar(who could kill him easly) because he Don't speak ๐ค he not smart or cautios like a typical anime protagonist so i expected many of the mighty plot armor to save him i don't know if in the future he change it not problem for me hopely because he can learn from experience.and the last not least his system' is kinda stupid because a sytem who can talk back to his master is a flag a System must only do something if the the master ordered and do something if the MC is in danger and cannot command the system.oh and i hope he not a simp in the future(its Because he lost his mind when he see Freya it kinda a flag for me๐คญ๐ค) because if him a simp/naive/boy Scout who follow a girl order because she is preety and get wall over because she is sexy,let go someone who want to kill him because she is preety and not because something smart .๐คฎ๐คฎ. Its just my opinion don't be angry author ๐
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