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She’s been taking risks throughout her journey. Andrea is a girl who never afraid of anything. Never afraid that in every step she’s been doing would be dangerous that it may take her life. Sometimes she’s been called out PYTHONS COMRADES, it attacks whenever it bothers. Aside from being a pythons comrades, she is also well known in terms of swimming. She appears scary in front of others, but would it be the same in front of love?
“Why are you following me? “
“I’m not following you”
“Then, what are you doing?”
“I’m just trying to see the scenery here”
“oh, just admit that you are falling’”
“I’m not”
“You’re so cute whenever you act like that.”
“....... “
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it's a good story, but there are some typos and tenses and repetitions that are reducing the flow of the story. but those can be fixed with a little more attention and work. good job auther and good luck
I am recommending to read this book. its really good . The story is interesting . Your time will not be wasted when you read dare to fall.
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Interesting plot and I can say the story has potential. There are some grammar issues like misplaced or missing punctuations and sentence structure. So it disrupts the reading flow. I suggest Author use Grammarly. It is a good tool for editing that can correct such basic mistakes. Keep it up Author! ☺️👍 Your story is going good.
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It was a promising story. I have to give you credit on that. But there were some grammatical erros such as typos and tenses which can be solved easily later on. Keep on writing and reading other author's works to inspire you also. :)