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Follow our protagonist without memory of his past self he woke up in a normal family....wait isn't that Martha Kent.....why is she calling me son?. (Disclaimer, First fanfic to learn how to write.)
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Well, the interactions of the protagonist with his family and the rest are very poorly managed and the system is redundant. You should have chosen a fantasy world from some game or novel, the DC world doesn't suit your perspective.
-Demasiados errores ortográficos -En algunos capítulos hablas de la importancia de los secretos, pero cuentas todo lo relacionado a tus poderes a tus padres... para mi eso es un gran No. Con la cantidad de seres que pueden leer la mente en ese mundo, da la impresión que simplemente no le importa su familia al contarles todo. - Usas mucho las estadisticas en cada capitulo. Mucho de lo escrito es Número y niveles del sistema. - Usas IA? - Creo firmemente que falta desarrollo de sus habilidades , el hecho de que empieze 15 años despues y solo pueda usar magia de viento... Es una falta de desarrollo en el esquema de magia que deseas usar. - Las relaciones se sienten monótonas, creo que es la falta de diálogo. - Veo que actualizas con frecuencia eso se aprecia. - Falta detallar la construcción del mundo y del entorno. Sería apropiado poner fechas y descripciones de donde se encuentra o localizaciones que faciliten al lector la inmersión a la lectura.
bs systm with stats point, not gonna bother tell all the other problems this is a no go for a superman fanfic
I love the story I can't wait for more chapters and there are no major issue on the story its very interesting and I enjoy the story
while there are many typos I like the story so far and can't wait for more. keep up the good work.recommend a intro so that you can capture more people's attention past the title
Horrible novel and looks to be written by AI. Story makes zero sense and also tons of positive bot reviews.Horrible novel and looks to be written by AI. Story makes zero sense and also tons of positive bot reviews.Horrible novel and looks to be written by AI. Story makes zero sense and also tons of positive bot reviews.
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A very interesting and pleasant story, it's a shame that the chapters take so long to be published, but I still really like the concept of this FF
La mejor historia de DC que haya visto, me encanta. El sistema es un poco confuso pero el aprendizaje de magia arregló todo, esperando el o los emparejamientos.
it's really not good, there's a lot of stuff wrong, it already seems written by an AI (lack of dialogue) then the characters are not consistent with themselves which is a big problem for a author. then a dungeon, seriously, you really need that in dc, there are so many ways to nerf a character. I would say that the beginning is good, after all is good to throw away