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Deal with The Devil!

Fantasy 121 Chapters 134.9K Views
Author: Odayaka

4.77 (15 ratings)

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Synopsis

With a power he did not desire, a devil was born.

An old soul with a new truth, a new body with an identical name.

A story of a reincarnator who was thrown into a twisted world shadowed by the battles of Gods and Devils to claim souls of others as his own.

With the seven chakras and the mysterious Dragon Energy dormant within their bodies, every being has a chance to attain Divinity!

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"As long as you can afford the price, there is nothing in this world that I cannot grant."

The devil who roams the surface of the shattered world, granting wishes to those who have lost their way.

Jinn, the devil in the house of Gods, walks in daylight, becoming stronger day by day. Consuming souls, growing stronger and leaving empty shells of those who have all...

Made a deal with the Devil.

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What to expect from this Novel: A lot of suspense and horror is the main ingredient. The MC himself is a devil who has a very gray moral code. The novel is very story-rich, with deep characters and their involvement.

and a lot of Deals WIth The Devils

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    ~Updated Review~ Recommended reading before deciding: 1-36 TLDR: The story is clearly written well and is definitely worth the read, but pacing issues for the first 30 chapters mean that some readers might not stick around long enough to actually enjoy the payoff. Its a diamond in the rough, but its up to the reader to decide how much they want to dig to uncover. ---------------------------- So, my previous review was based on what was present up to my current reading at the time (chapter 25) in the story. In that review I brought up the point that it felt like more questions always were added without ever answering any, leading to undue confusion and overwhelming questions that took away from the story as It made if difficult to follow. The author then reached out to me and let me know that I had apparently stopped reading right before those questions started getting answered. With that in mind, I decided to, due to the quality of the writing (which is very strong btw outside the pacing), which led to what I would consider to be an unfair review on my part. On top of that, the slow pacing picks up considerably, and the synopsis finally starts to make sense all around chapters 30-36. There is also some VERY good writing and intelligent maneuvering by the MC that I was pleasantly surprised to see, as it isnt the normal "Death note"-esk "Smarts" but is instead something you may just miss if your not paying attention, and the story doesnt go on and on about how great it was, the author allows it to be great on its own merit. Now the negatives... Despite the huge payoff and the newfound interest I've gained for the story, I still have to dock SOME points for the beginning of the story. It isn't explained well, and the pacing for revealing what's going on is kinda all at once at the end of the arc, which made it harder to stay interested up to that point. Im also not a fan of the fact that the payoff for the free chapters, which in my opinion feels like a prologue of sorts, is in the locked chapters. I feel like that does a disservice for the story. I was willing to risk some coins due to the authors clear skill and personal message assuring me of the payoff, but not everyone will be willing to do that, which might lose the author some readers.

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    Frank_Lee_Junior

    The mighty cat has spoken, here is the seal of approval.

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    Odayaka
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    Author here with a short spoiler review on the work I have been working on for the past three months. I really look forward to all of you loving it. Reborn as an orphan, Jinn realized the world was not as simple as it seemed. He was born with a mysterious ability that came with chains that tied his fate to eternal damnation. In a world ruled by churches, where faith fuels divine power, Jinn had become… a Devil. The archnemesis of the gods.

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    zenderman_

    So far there's only been a chapter and a prologue but its looking great. The mystery is building up. Hoping for this book to achieve great success! Cheers 🍻

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    CloverNine

    Odayaka never cease to surprise. He drop another new book, so it's certainly a novel we must look forward to. Give it a try XDDD [img=recommend]

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    NathanBESH

    You know this kind of situation when the suspense and mystery takes too long to be revealed, all the excitements dies down and the book becomes tiring to read. That’s what is exactly happening to this novel right now. We are in chapter 25 but the story still hasn’t picked up! And there are occasions when the author doesn’t fully explain what is happening and cuts right off to another scene, and sometimes you’ll be hoping he comes back to it to explain but he doesn’t!! The novel is a great idea and has potential but the author can’t really express his incredible thoughts and ideas to us fully. I hope the author can keep a voice recorder of his novel idea before typing them out. It will help him to keep pace of how to express his thoughts.

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    Primordial_Seven

    The first chapter seems rather promising, let's see what the author can cook later

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    Velstad
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    As someone who has read the book months in advance and know how much planning and work was put into it, I feel obligated to give it a five star review even if I have yet to read it on the site. Personally, I absolutely adore the kind of story with a main character hiding in plain sight while becoming stronger. The main character is also an illusionist which I love in main characters. While the world background itself isn't perfect (and let's be honest, there is no such a thing as perfect) I can see this book being the author's best yet. Cheers.

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    luna_Chambers

    This was such an engaging read! You’ve got a style that feels very cinematic, every scene had a strong visual pull that would look stunning in art. I’m new here, and I’d love to know what you think about it.

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    GiyotoKishiro

    Hmm, So i feel like giving five star to the great work. The vocab and writing is definately a good thing about the book. Besides that the story telling is a cherry on top of a cake.

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    Ana_musings

    Deserves nothing short of five fantastic stars. Oda has been working on this story for a long time, so I know for sure this one is going to be a sensational read. The mother of cats approves!

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    SeraphWedd

    Only two chapters in, but I'm already liking the atmosphere of the book! I'm curious about the underlying mystery of the prologue, too. How will it relate to the main story? Anyway, the content's too short to fully judge for now, but I'm sure this is a book worth reading!

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    Anonymus_Nighter

    There aren't many chapters out right now, but I still love the book, and wanted to leave a review. As for why it's five star is because it's Odayaka's work, and it's bound to be a book worthy of five star. Though, in future, if I change my opinion of the book, then I might come back with a new review.

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    mina97

    Hi, Your story was genuinely moving, the emotional pacing, tone, and atmosphere were so strong that the scenes practically drew themselves in my mind. I create Webtoon/Comic/Manga and Character/Cover Art. Your writing could translate beautifully into a visual format. If you’d like, I can share a sample concept of how your scenes could look. Discord: (minakn0ws) | IG: (eve_verse_) Mina

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    AvaThalassaQuinn

    Hi there! Your story truly captivated me every word painted such vivid imagery, it felt alive. I’m @lunapuresoul, a comic artist who loves turning stories into visuals, and your writing instantly inspired me. If you’d ever like to explore that together, feel free to reach out on Discord (ava_crafts). or Instagram (eve_verse_).

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