Deidara In MHA

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DeidaraS_Dango

Hello, please tell me what you think of the story I will try to change things if you guys want but thank you for taking your yime to read this

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kobeblackmamba

Thanks for the great chapters! Can't wait for the next! Thanks for the great chapters! Can't wait for the next! Thanks for the great chapters! Can't wait for the next! Thanks for the great chapters! Can't wait for the next! Thanks for the great chapters! Can't wait for the next! Thanks for the great chapters! Can't wait for the next! Thanks for the great chapters! Can't wait for the next!

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DarthVegito

Story is rushed to the point that there isnt any reason to read this fanfic lol and for some reason for the festival the mc is fight The Shadow Monarch soooo this story is going nowhere unless it is rewritten.... the entire story rewritten

super good...............................................................................................,.................. ...............

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EndlessSpeed

Hmm the chapters have improved , and gives further detailed what the main character wants. The writing has also improved , author has gotten his grammer to an ok level, the chapters have also increased a bit of words. Updating stability is pretty good so far. The story development seems a bit rush, but it gets straight to the point to which most people want anyways. Character Design still has some flaws, main character is bit hard to understand. World background is alright but could be better. This is my second time reviewing this, and its a good fast read. Hope the author continues on writing and improving along the way.

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Stealthkug

I just really like deidaras powers and is a decently op character so I just respect you from reading the first chapter. ...................

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Green_Wood_3759

It would be an awesome book if it wasn’t so rushed there are to many timeskips and what not And I think this book has so much potential in it but it git wasted I just hooe you rewrite it

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ThouShaltNotDie

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DiperZ

Me salte del cap 6 al último porque aparecía Sung Jin woo y nada que ver este personaje y veo que en el último está peleando hisoka contra alguien que no sé quién es. Para eso dices que es un mha nuevo con insertos de personajes de otro animes,manwhas etc

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DeidaraS_Dango

Please read up to chapter 15 or so before you drop because thats when it starts to get better because ngl the early chaoters kinda suck