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Leanne here~ I'm looking forward to see the sect members inside this story, I'm sure it'll be fun! ʕ´• ᴥ•̥`ʔ I'll be watching this story closely... I mean, Nom will probably remind us of it anyway! Good luck >////< Love you! Mwah!
I really love the idea! The story is great! I'm hooookkkeeeeeddddd WHAHAHAAHAHAHA thanks for the blessing author! More powerrr and more love ✨✨✨
Just reading the first chappy already sparked my interest. Very interesting way to start a novel! I have to admit... You captured my personality nicely OwO Keep up the good work author! (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)
Very interesting and extraordinary topic with an even special storyline......good luck to the author and his books keep up your hard work.....
I like the light conversation between the characters even after the grim scene. The storytelling implies a good mystery to make it interesting. Add more chapters! I think it has a lot of potentials and there's Mae!!! You captured her personality precisely. I love it ❤
\(￣︶￣*\)) I laughed a lot when I've finished reading the synopsis. Hahaha~ This sound so interesting. I will have fun reading this. Update soon author. (づ￣ 3￣)づ Just give me more chapters.
Okay, I came here for Lucrus... Why is your name Nomed here??? Anyways, Its nice But need more chapters to get more readers. Plus It has potentials from my view, Good Luck!
It's a Shocking, Weird Name but interesting Storyline. You better Write more Senpai. Its getting interesting, And Mae, hilarious. Exactly like her, Well I will wait for more
Hehe, Lucrus!!!!! I am here! Hehe like you said! I loved it, ! I love all your stories! I wish for more Chappies! And also Hugs! Hug me when you see this!!
Can't say if its good, Cause it's only one Chapter. The way how the story is, fills me with curiosity. I wonder what will happened in the next chapter.
I love it! It's nice! The way how you wrote it actually impressive. To be honest I know you'll get there, Update more, Work harder. And you shall receive it.
Hehe, I thought Incest at first. But it was nice I love the first Chappy already. Hehe I want more So curious hehehehehe. I can't stop laughing
The book was awesome. I liked it. I wished you did more Editings and stuffs. But man you did a Great Job. I will see what more you can write. Don't stop I am you biggest fan from now!
Hehe! Author-san Another book again?! I love it!!!!!!!!! Sister thing now?! You're full of wonders!!!!!!!!!! I wuv you hehe! Write more! Please!
Got to admit that the Writing Quality itself is good. I'm not looking forward to more but Stability of Updates being 2 months is surely not good at all. Story Development would do better with some actual introduction. Feels more like I just started off an ongoing story. Can't give a real rating for it though because not enough so free neutral star. I can put Character Design in one phrase. An inside joke. Well it's either an inside joke or just bad but I'm betting on the former because the writing itself is actually good. The review section just enforces this assumption. World Building? I'm not even sure if this is on earth lol. Most I understand is that there is a police box (or something of the sort) and a highschool. Usually at least the setting would be found out during exposition but no. Just no. Because we don't have one. Word of advice for the cliche they have going. Might be better to run a D&D game instead. Lets people actually play their OC instead of it just being portrayed. Well you could just roleplay but D&D and the like have that limiter so people can't just go haywire with 50/50 Angel/Demon Deity of Death equipped with +2 infinity epidermis! Just an example...
..................................................... Well I am the author, So I would give a Review for myself, wouldn't I? Well this story is really complicated, actually it's a Collab with the members of the Unnamed God Sector. Well hope you will like it, Ciao! And special Thanks for my friends for Helping me out!