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Love it, Good Grammar, Author uploads 1 or 2 chapters a day Mc doesn't think with his d*ck Mc isn't an egoistic asshole Mc isn't too op but is still Really Strong
It's great so far and so is the update schedule ,I like how the story is so far and he isn't made too op. I really hope you keep it going and don't drop it
The one thing I will give the author is that their grammar is, for the most part, good. In terms of grammar, the story is readable and not difficult to interpret. Other than that, the story is pretty bad. The author adopts a tell approach instead of showing. For example, the main character is supposed to have extreme intelligence. However, there are several occasions where they act like a complete idiot. Another problem comes in the form of the mcs martial arts training. The author writes that they are capable of beating martial arts masters, but the mc shows virtually no fighting ability. We are told that the mc beats masters in one scene, but shown the mc nearly losing a fight to a theoretically weaker opponent in the form of Muscular. I tried to read it all the way through because I saw some decent reviews, but I simply couldn't. The story is far too inconsistent to enjoy.
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Love this fanfic has so much potential I just hope no one jinx it by saying this novel will be dropped cause I've seen too many people posting those reviews even though the fanfic isn't yeah so my message is don't jinx it.
Superman is supposed to be FASTER then speeding bullets Dude, WTF? With each chapter, you weaken krytonian power again and again. The next thing you know, Michael will be killed by Mineta bacause mineta's balls stuck to michael face
I don't like this mc att all! He does not behave like a human. He is portrayed like Jesus on steroids- no desires for himself at all. I mean even good heroes have desires for themselves rather just helping everyone. Also, MC is forced to be this stupid Super-Jesus by the author without any context for any other reason then (JUST BECAUSE)
It started quite nice but as i progress to later chapters, i would always find myself either cringing or getting irritated 🤯 Too bad i really like the plot Pyrre Out 👻👻👻
I like it... Yep, that’s it... What else do you want? Read it yourself if you’re so curious.... Okay okay no need for violence, we can all enjoy the novel together, yeah? Cool!!
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Had potential to be a great novel but then the author decides to make him only to unlock his full power at the age of 21 so way after the entire plot of BNHA lol and he changes the kryptonian powers to him glowing gold and choosing what to enhance like strength or speed.... it’s not even kryptonian powers it’s just some cheap knock off
Hi ireally liked this story but i think it's dropped.... can anyone recommend stories like this one with oc character that has a good quirk but not too OP
This novel had potential and it still does I mean it ain't all the way gone I am not ganna give a **** rating cause of just one chapter gone wrong but too Op mc is well not all bad but mc just freezing waiting for his powers to be taken even though he could have flown away but yeah I get it from mc prospective the great all for one is here and I for one would get scare f*ck logic cause no way would I suddenly expect him to show up so I can relate but think about it if he didn't have the plot armor where the notification said his powers couldn't be taken could it have been the end of our beloved mc anyway author it cool my dude no one is perfect anyways it not a big deal you can always fix stuff and it's just one chapter okay fellow readers don't be over reacting sayin this has gone straight to hell it isn't that big of a deal just one blunder great fanfic you have goin on here and I'm out.
Honestly, one of the best story i've read in a while. Not only the MC is pretty cool maybe too OP but well, he have superman powers so... Also the characters like Izuku and Bakugou change through Michael but still respect the manga, i find that really great. Just, please, don't make a harem, anything but that. I hope to read the next chapter soon. Thank you
author constantly skips small but important details. its basically just a watered down version of the original with a boring op mc. ....................
The story is great and with great potential. The MC is OP which is 👍🏻, no complain there. The only complain is, update the chapters faster.
Man this is an awesome story, keep it up man and i look forward to the rest of this mighty glory. PLUS ULTRA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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thanks for the chapter. Ainda bem que você voltou, " esperando por mais capítulo.140: jdhjrhdfjfjdjdhdjdjfjgjfjdhdjfjfjdhdjfjfjfjdydudjdjdjfjfjfjdhdhdhuufdhjfhdhdhdhdhdhdd
Great story. It’s well written, entertaining, and doesn’t deviate from the original plot My hero Academia. The mc isn’t too overpowered and has a great personality to be a hero.
Shameless self review of 5 stars, going to try my best with this story, whenever im not busy irl, I need characters so ill keep writing this sentence.