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[VOLUME ONE - THE RISE OF AN HEIR]
It all started with a nightmare that Elena had on her first day in her last year of high school. She was a regular girl who wished for her last school days to go out without any drama. Little did she know that she was an heir to a group called the DEMON BLOOD.
She is classified as the type of girl with an undistracted mind, and an undisturbed soul but beneath the depth of the mind inside the blood of an innocent girl was something hidden, strange, unknown, and mystical. She was naive but her innocent soul was contaminated by some strange forces, making her exhibit some kind of powers.
For Elena to find out the truth, she was told to go to the dungeon of curses where no one made it out alive. She was told she'll find something that would lead her to where the truth was kept. She didn't mind losing her life in the quest for the truth so she went ahead with the journey to the DUNGEON OF CURSES.
Will she make it out alive? Will her newly discovered powers become a threat to others? What will happen when the truth comes out? The answers to these questions are in the upcoming series of DEMON BLOOD.
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Write a reviewThe introduction of this story had a very captivating and intriguing start with more to the world-building and background of the main plot, This story has a lot of potential~ Keep up the good work!
Everything was put in the right place and it was easy to understand the story. The plot seems promising and despite just some minor grammatical errors, the story is intriguing. I hope you keep it up, author!
Story has quite the mysterious vibe and author has done well with descriptions. Pacing was pretty good too although chapters did feel a little short - maybe because I was just enjoying the story. The plot is quite unique and while there isn't much world-building rn, other parts of the story make up for that. The only real negative thing I have for this story is that there are some grammar mistakes but they're minor.
The Author's writing skills has really progressed after reading her first book. All I have to say is good job on this one.
Everything was great the story, the characters, the flow of the story, author writing style was reader friendly, only one downside was it too short for a chapter per week.
This Book's synopsis had me curious to pick it up, and as I glance through the pages, the suspense and the thrills all combined. I don't regret reading this book, it was worth it. I recommend it for all!
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I would advise the author to focus on building a strong plotline that gradually unveils the mysteries surrounding Elena and the DEMON BLOOD. While it is tempting to reveal everything all at once, it is crucial to keep readers hooked and curious by maintaining a sense of intrigue and suspense. It is also essential to create well-rounded characters that readers can relate to, empathize with, and invest in emotionally. Elena's journey should be characterized by growth, transformation, and self-discovery, as she uncovers her hidden powers and learns to navigate the dangerous world of the DEMON BLOOD. Moreover, the author should strive to balance action, drama, and character development to keep the story engaging and entertaining. Finally, the author should pay close attention to pacing, description, and dialogue, ensuring that each scene is vivid, immersive, and contributes to the overall narrative. In summary, the author should prioritize plot, character, and pacing to craft a compelling and unforgettable story in the upcoming series of DEMON BLOOD. Good Luck.