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This story about a boy named Vendross that has downloaded a game named Demon GTX that has made his life go up side down . This novel also tells us about his journey . and his love story
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good concept but poor delivery. it was really tough to make it to the end. It was Very dramatic wild pov shifts but all in all a good first attempt. I suggest working on your pacing. separate character dialogue for easier reading. in stead of meshing everything into one paragraph. good plot twist ending. your story reads like a draft outline. with the right amount of details added you could really make it a fun novel. good luck in your future writing endeavors you have potential.
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