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"Did magic affect the speed of the humans' corruption and greed, or did it just reveal their true selves?
Within the dystopian future, where humans had explored and put their names on several different planets, they had instituted a grading system.
the leaders of the planets had been instructed to give reports to the governments so they could gauge its ranking against the others:
Creating a hierarchy.
And centuries passed without anyone saying a word, until a young man by the name of Crim opposed the system, but his war had failed, and the officials forced him into a simple Bounty hunter.
That had been until the young man lost to his target, and finally detached from the nature of humans he hated so much
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Write a reviewIts good though it has its cons: First the concept has a lot of potential, its like a twist in the evoulitoan or race changing genre. Though till around chapter 20 it does get a bit confusing at times, but the fighthing scenes are extremely good especially the one in the latest chapter. Also I like The mcs personality, despite being young hes already established values and there seems to be a big backstory around him, also like how snarky and chaotic he is. He doesnt hesitate to use underhanded methods, or kill unless it benefits him to keep a person alive. Also its pretty similiar to Supreme magus in theme, but this time instead of medieval its dsytopian cyberpunk that has a lot of potential thanks to there being a lot more planets and oppurtinity. 4.9/5
It's a pretty good novel. The only thing the author needs to work on is the story's pacing. Sometimes it feels too fast and you may get lost. Other than that, I do believe that the story has the potential to become something big if that sole problem gets solved. Has good grammar, a great idea behind the world-building, and the MC is likable! Don't give up, author! We learn from our mistakes after all. Have a nice writing and may your novel prosper! ;)
This is pretty good! The initial cyberpunk vybe and mystery regarding both the protagonist and the world overall was very captivating. Crim seems like a cool character with tons of room to gro, so I'm looking forward to it.
Easily one of the best stories I've read on WN. Aside from some minor grammar mistakes, I'd say the writing quality is top notch. The plot is quite interesting, and Crim makes for a fun protagonist. I'd really recommend this one.
The chapters are a tad bit short, but that's still fixable at this moment. I found myself laughing while reading the first few chapters. I loved it.
The novel has quite a wide array of interesting things like a magic system, mystical beings and demons. There is also two separate worlds that I think kinda resembles an isekai. Good pacing and weird momentos I like!
The book will be on hold for a little bit, Unless I decide to change back to deviant before I finish with endless magic, but chapters will be posted sometimes.
While its still a bit early, I have to say so far its been really good, the writing is great, descriptions aren't flowery yet' still very detailed, theres a couple errors but no novel is perfect, I could tell the author put effort into designing the world; the power/magic system is cool; clever and devious MCs are my favorites, so I find Crim interesting, who, on top of being funny, is pretty likeable; and even though he is a demon, he still has principles. The fight scenes are entertaining, and the story also has a good pace. The author could improve the updates, but overall, this novel has a lot of potential.
Reveal SpoilerThis is a great book. Awesome plot and great world-building. The character design is excellent as it makes you attracted to read more about what is going to happen next. The writing style is great, giving a smooth road for us to read on. Great work author!
Author Kexer
As a man I would like to congratule myself, because I did a good job