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Doomed to Eternity

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Author: Coyle

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The Lord is our judge,
The Lord is our lawgiver,
The Lord is our king;
It is he who will save us.

These were words that the King had heard many times in his life. At first, he didn't believe in it, but after facing the fragility of mortality, there was no believer with more faith than him.

People were born,
People grew older,
People married,
People had a family.
People died.

People died. But he didn't. It was supposed to be a natural occurrence; but every time his life ended he returned to his lowest point; to suffer, he suspected. Would he one day be able to be free? To be happy?

Only the Lord knows.

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Coyle
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I will finish this novel, have a good day 🙏

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AMonarch

From the first chapter, I was hooked and couldn't wait to read more. Despite the fact that there are only a few chapters available, the story has already piqued my interest. I can't wait to see where it goes from here. The quality of the writing is evident, and it's clear that the author has put a lot of effort into crafting this tale.

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AceAmbrosia

It's a nice start. It makes you curious about what will happen next. The conversations aren't awkward, which I can't say for many other novels on the platform. In other words, it's a great story!

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Quasy
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pfft being a good king is overrated!! This novel is very well written and the story flows perfectly from scene to scene making it an enjoyable read. The pace of the story also works well with the plot! cant wait to read more!

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vorlefan

It's like a poem and odyssey. Really worth to give a try. I don't have much to talk about the story and everything else, because there are few chapters available. By for what I read so far, it's good. The only problem here is the grammar and the flow, sometimes it breaks the experience of the reader, but I'm certain that it would be changed in the future, and for that, I'm in. Adding to the Library :)

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ChellyArks

This is very well written. I'd expect something like this in a bookstore. Unlike most of the stuff I've read, there's a quality here that I didn't expect to see. Really, I'm very surprised to see such good writing. As for the story, it's interesting enough for me to continue past the first chapter. I'll see where it goes, but this is a very good start

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SaraSaavedra

I love the use of biblical terms in a story about a loop in time. I have to say that despite the fact that the synopsis is simple, it ends up catching you. It is definitely a story that promises to be a success. I want to continue reading more chapters.

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