DragonBall N

LV 15

Unmotivatedbro5

it is the constant incorrect word usage and grammar that immediately turns me away, I normally don't have a problem with works that have a few grammar mistakes, but this just got me cringing with the the first few paragraphs. I'm not sure if it'll be consistent in later chapters but I just couldn't continuing reading. If the author ever actually manages to actually proofread their work and make appropriate changes(they don't have to be perfect.) I would gladly come back to read this.

LV 1

Gild_Rakingh

I like the novel. And things are going pretty well, but I think the jump from the buu saga to GT has been too hasty. Just like the one-year timeskip to the Budokai was. The character appeared with a tail, he did not use any power, he quickly defeated the enemies and there was another jump where he suddenly became the strongest.

LV 1

Darkiling

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