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Write a reviewI finally read some chapter! My bored and sick mind cannot stay still so I read this piece of masterpiece. Writing Quality is great for an ******* writer. I gave it 4.8 only because you need to have room for growth. Heck, I'll give J.K. Rowling a 4.8 so she can also improve... not like she needs more improvement but you get my point, right? Stability of Updates is great. I always receive notifications where ever there is one, and I saw it happening every day so you can expect the author will deliver. Story Development is best. Someone called the author a person with the second male lead syndrome and I can see why now. LOL. There is more to the story than your first expectation. Character Design is a fun part of every novel. I like Lila's character best and not because she is the main character, but because she is relatable. For world background, I gave 5 stars because I love the story all in all. I will read the rest soon. Gambatte, Author-san!
Updated review This book will be rewritten from scratch. new book title will be fantasia of the stars. It will be a complete re-write. Though I may use some old scenes. coming out in June 2021 -XOMatsumaeohana
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when author I have read you three books including this and what I found the most intriguing part is that the way of writing of yours has stolen my heart. I have tried so many novels from so many website but there II I haven't found any that seen pleasing to my habitual reading. the way you depict the emotions to your writing is fantastic to read I really love your written work of novels and specially the novel of fantasy how well you have written is I like it very much much and love it the way you portrayed everything. the way of writing unique and iIlobe Ur style of writing iIreally hope if you publish your novel they will be popular and evn that eternal love is my favorite one.
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I really don't read this type of books I like sifi better but this book was good it was a change from what I always read you should read this book it's really goid
I skimmed through this list and there are some very horribly written books on it. Like "Dream star"". provides great adviceβ¦Through case studies and user friendly diagrams and statistics youβre able to understand the best approachβ¦The ideas in this book and its analytical approach have inspired me, and I would recommend the book to anyone involved in fundraising, sponsorship or funding applications
A good novel... I wish more people could...read this book. The characters are written very well. The plot is very unique too. My favourite character is the second ML, Haruka. His journey from the start to the latest chapter keeps you on edge and wondering.
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This is such a great story! ..................................................................................................................
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All the stars are fully marked. Because it's worthy of respect that the author updated so stably. I may quite dislike the Japanese namings and the too many snippets of the characters' thoughts. I was like, is this in third POV, or secretly written in first POV and then the pronouns are just switched off? But the effort the author put into it makes me ignore it. Narration is solid and at least won't make people read back twice to understand what's going on. P.S: I'm just a bit skeptical about the rank since there were so little comments compared to the other novels at the same range and I don't see the story in any other rankings for original or fanfic apart from the power ranking. *Shrugs* But whatever. Story-wise, it's okay.
Reveal SpoilerGarbage, what a let down. Fucking crap, what is this about with ML habing do brains and FL is spineled . Smut is stipid ans. Why no dog food.
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I've been reading this story since the start and it only gets better and better. Lila and Haruka's relationship is filled with complications. Many could argue that the relationship is filled with lust, but I don't think it's like that. They truly care for each other. The ML Austin Kiryu has only been shown a couple of times but his care for her won't lose out. Still, I think this story will end with Lila and Haruka. We are finally at the stage where the enemies are starting to make a move too.
This novel is simply one of the best I've come across so far and i think its up there with some of the all time best and its sure gonna make the best of all time...i love it!π
hello guys , HOW ARE YOU TODAY???πππππ i am just happy to read my one of favorite webnovel story and I can say that thr's no chapter that im not satisfied .....so guys, what are you waiting for??? add this story in your webnovel ......I recommend this
Some stories are eternal, and while writers donβt necessarily repeat them word-for-word through the generations, they are capable of crafting compelling echoes that evoke both the time weβre in and the universal emotional constants of humanity. Evoking that sense of universality...
Some stories are eternal, and while writers donβt necessarily repeat them word-for-word through the generations, they are capable of crafting compelling echoes that evoke both the time weβre in and the universal emotional constants of humanity. Evoking that sense of universality...
this web novel is great ,, the stability of the story is also good and very interesting... I admit the thoughts is well express.....and the storyline each of it give you a diff. emotion ππππππ dream star for me says it all......clap clap clap for you author
Loving the storyline. Canβt wait to see how the story progresses as each chapters are introduced ..Looking forward to it. Love every characters will be introduced
Ahahahahahahahahahah was my morning baby. howβs work going to work today? I am getting back from the taco on Tuesday morning. buffalo chicken dinner tonight?? I will have to go get there now and then we go back out there. I donβt want to next time we are going to come over
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i m in love with this novel, this one of the best novel i have come across so far, i have read this novel again and again while waiting for the update, guyzx believe me tht u wonβt regret reading this novel...
I was debating if I should read this story and I do not regret reading it. It is so interesting and good that I canβt stop reading it. I love how the story begins to develop. Itβs very interesting and I recommend others to read it.
ew Apps By LifeGoals New Reviews Contact Positive Reviews Negative Reviews Negative Reviews in Most Helpful 30% NEGATIVE REVIEWS Out of 120 most helpful reviews Aug 17, 2019by Angela Xiong New updates sucks! It takes more than 5-10 mins for my library to load then for it to freeze up while I'm reading a chapter and close the entire app on me just to repeat it all over again! The hell! Do you een care if you are losing your readers! If this keeps up, I'm going to either uninstall all updates for this app or completely give up on it! It's not worth all the trouble it gives me!!!!!!!!! Aug 14, 2019by cyj waytan I guess the positive ratings that were given here just started/kinda started using this app. I highly recommended this app before, but the people behind this app became greedy capitalists who only cares about money. If the privilege reading hasn't been removed or at least lower its price and didn't remove the double unlock (pay privilege and unlock chapters) within this month, then I'll finally uninstall this app. I'll just read these novels online since they are also available. The Spirit Stone Problem. Mar 4, 2019by Ztched This app has great stories, an interface that is pleasing to the eye, a pretty decent system in which it uses to decide on the most popular books and what books people want to see next, however, there is a large flaw that makes this great system fail. And that flaw is the overly greedy and overpriced Spirit Stone system. For almost all of the popular, reccomended, or highly rated books, Webnovel has employed a system upon it called premium. It requires the reader to use Spirit stones to unlock and read chapters, but if you want to read a few premium books at a time, you will need to either make several fake emails and invite them to earn a decent ammount, or spend money to gain them at a decent rate. The alternative methods they give you such as checking in, voting power and energy stones, and watching videos arenβt enough to read all the books you would want. This is the overarching problem with this, and this apps intial lure is the freeness of the whole process, and if you donβt want to spend 25 bucks a month to read your favortie books, then I donβt reccomend getting invested into this app.
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So I'm going to warn everyone first. The first chapter is 10K, it's really long. Around 80 or so pages on the mobile version. It's much easier to read the 1st chapter on the web version. π I'm really sorry about the length of the first chapter, I wasn't aware of the length of chapters posted on WN and I haven't posted any of my stories online in so many years. Pretty nervous about this too π€ so it's a test run. If people do like it, I'll continue. I hope you all enjoy and don't hesitate to point out mistakes in my clumsy writing.
I finally read some chapter! My bored and sick mind cannot stay still so I read this piece of masterpiece. Writing Quality is great for an ******* writer. I gave it 4.8 only because you need to have room for growth. Heck, I'll give J.K. Rowling a 4.8 so she can also improve... not like she needs more improvement but you get my point, right? Stability of Updates is great. I always receive notifications where ever there is one, and I saw it happening every day so you can expect the author will deliver. Story Development is best. Someone called the author a person with the second male lead syndrome and I can see why now. LOL. There is more to the story than your first expectation. Character Design is a fun part of every novel. I like Lila's character best and not because she is the main character, but because she is relatable. For world background, I gave 5 stars because I love the story all in all. I will read the rest soon. Gambatte, Author-san!
Updated review This book will be rewritten from scratch. new book title will be fantasia of the stars. It will be a complete re-write. Though I may use some old scenes. coming out in June 2021 -XOMatsumaeohana
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when author I have read you three books including this and what I found the most intriguing part is that the way of writing of yours has stolen my heart. I have tried so many novels from so many website but there II I haven't found any that seen pleasing to my habitual reading. the way you depict the emotions to your writing is fantastic to read I really love your written work of novels and specially the novel of fantasy how well you have written is I like it very much much and love it the way you portrayed everything. the way of writing unique and iIlobe Ur style of writing iIreally hope if you publish your novel they will be popular and evn that eternal love is my favorite one.
Story sucks πππππ This gets many reads? Wow ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I really don't read this type of books I like sifi better but this book was good it was a change from what I always read you should read this book it's really goid
I skimmed through this list and there are some very horribly written books on it. Like "Dream star"". provides great adviceβ¦Through case studies and user friendly diagrams and statistics youβre able to understand the best approachβ¦The ideas in this book and its analytical approach have inspired me, and I would recommend the book to anyone involved in fundraising, sponsorship or funding applications
A good novel... I wish more people could...read this book. The characters are written very well. The plot is very unique too. My favourite character is the second ML, Haruka. His journey from the start to the latest chapter keeps you on edge and wondering.
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This is such a great story! ..................................................................................................................
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All the stars are fully marked. Because it's worthy of respect that the author updated so stably. I may quite dislike the Japanese namings and the too many snippets of the characters' thoughts. I was like, is this in third POV, or secretly written in first POV and then the pronouns are just switched off? But the effort the author put into it makes me ignore it. Narration is solid and at least won't make people read back twice to understand what's going on. P.S: I'm just a bit skeptical about the rank since there were so little comments compared to the other novels at the same range and I don't see the story in any other rankings for original or fanfic apart from the power ranking. *Shrugs* But whatever. Story-wise, it's okay.
Reveal SpoilerGarbage, what a let down. Fucking crap, what is this about with ML habing do brains and FL is spineled . Smut is stipid ans. Why no dog food.
Soo this is what I was missing out on πππππ So goood it makes me wanna scream π± I gotta give you props for this π©π©π©π©π©π©π©
kumbaya.............................................................................................................................................................................
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I've been reading this story since the start and it only gets better and better. Lila and Haruka's relationship is filled with complications. Many could argue that the relationship is filled with lust, but I don't think it's like that. They truly care for each other. The ML Austin Kiryu has only been shown a couple of times but his care for her won't lose out. Still, I think this story will end with Lila and Haruka. We are finally at the stage where the enemies are starting to make a move too.
This novel is simply one of the best I've come across so far and i think its up there with some of the all time best and its sure gonna make the best of all time...i love it!π
hello guys , HOW ARE YOU TODAY???πππππ i am just happy to read my one of favorite webnovel story and I can say that thr's no chapter that im not satisfied .....so guys, what are you waiting for??? add this story in your webnovel ......I recommend this
Some stories are eternal, and while writers donβt necessarily repeat them word-for-word through the generations, they are capable of crafting compelling echoes that evoke both the time weβre in and the universal emotional constants of humanity. Evoking that sense of universality...
Some stories are eternal, and while writers donβt necessarily repeat them word-for-word through the generations, they are capable of crafting compelling echoes that evoke both the time weβre in and the universal emotional constants of humanity. Evoking that sense of universality...
this web novel is great ,, the stability of the story is also good and very interesting... I admit the thoughts is well express.....and the storyline each of it give you a diff. emotion ππππππ dream star for me says it all......clap clap clap for you author
Loving the storyline. Canβt wait to see how the story progresses as each chapters are introduced ..Looking forward to it. Love every characters will be introduced
Ahahahahahahahahahah was my morning baby. howβs work going to work today? I am getting back from the taco on Tuesday morning. buffalo chicken dinner tonight?? I will have to go get there now and then we go back out there. I donβt want to next time we are going to come over
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i m in love with this novel, this one of the best novel i have come across so far, i have read this novel again and again while waiting for the update, guyzx believe me tht u wonβt regret reading this novel...
I was debating if I should read this story and I do not regret reading it. It is so interesting and good that I canβt stop reading it. I love how the story begins to develop. Itβs very interesting and I recommend others to read it.
ew Apps By LifeGoals New Reviews Contact Positive Reviews Negative Reviews Negative Reviews in Most Helpful 30% NEGATIVE REVIEWS Out of 120 most helpful reviews Aug 17, 2019by Angela Xiong New updates sucks! It takes more than 5-10 mins for my library to load then for it to freeze up while I'm reading a chapter and close the entire app on me just to repeat it all over again! The hell! Do you een care if you are losing your readers! If this keeps up, I'm going to either uninstall all updates for this app or completely give up on it! It's not worth all the trouble it gives me!!!!!!!!! Aug 14, 2019by cyj waytan I guess the positive ratings that were given here just started/kinda started using this app. I highly recommended this app before, but the people behind this app became greedy capitalists who only cares about money. If the privilege reading hasn't been removed or at least lower its price and didn't remove the double unlock (pay privilege and unlock chapters) within this month, then I'll finally uninstall this app. I'll just read these novels online since they are also available. The Spirit Stone Problem. Mar 4, 2019by Ztched This app has great stories, an interface that is pleasing to the eye, a pretty decent system in which it uses to decide on the most popular books and what books people want to see next, however, there is a large flaw that makes this great system fail. And that flaw is the overly greedy and overpriced Spirit Stone system. For almost all of the popular, reccomended, or highly rated books, Webnovel has employed a system upon it called premium. It requires the reader to use Spirit stones to unlock and read chapters, but if you want to read a few premium books at a time, you will need to either make several fake emails and invite them to earn a decent ammount, or spend money to gain them at a decent rate. The alternative methods they give you such as checking in, voting power and energy stones, and watching videos arenβt enough to read all the books you would want. This is the overarching problem with this, and this apps intial lure is the freeness of the whole process, and if you donβt want to spend 25 bucks a month to read your favortie books, then I donβt reccomend getting invested into this app.
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So I'm going to warn everyone first. The first chapter is 10K, it's really long. Around 80 or so pages on the mobile version. It's much easier to read the 1st chapter on the web version. π I'm really sorry about the length of the first chapter, I wasn't aware of the length of chapters posted on WN and I haven't posted any of my stories online in so many years. Pretty nervous about this too π€ so it's a test run. If people do like it, I'll continue. I hope you all enjoy and don't hesitate to point out mistakes in my clumsy writing.