Overall it is really good, but a tip from me to you, the best way to get a reader into something like romance...What I do is I turn the tables and lets say, dream fell in love with someone else and George goes into a big depression-like state? Idk, but I think that this story needs more of...God this is going to make me sound like a jerk-wad, but we need more of Clay/Dreams mom. We need more description on her. and we need more plot in general. Stay safe, Be gay do crime.
Overall it is really good, but a tip from me to you, the best way to get a reader into something like romance...What I do is I turn the tables and lets say, dream fell in love with someone else and George goes into a big depression-like state? Idk, but I think that this story needs more of...God this is going to make me sound like a jerk-wad, but we need more of Clay/Dreams mom. We need more description on her. and we need more plot in general. Stay safe, Be gay do crime.