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In a world where might defines one's stand watch, a devil with blood from two extinct clans must live as he pushes his limits and turns the impossible into reality.
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Just want to say that as a gamer fic fan I really hope that this will succeed. Presently it's not really worth five stars , but good luck and hope you will continue.
Ill provide my outlook of this fan fic: 1. The MC has too many bloodlines. 2. The development is too fast! Like in one chapter mc developed his breathing technique like in 3 weeks. Are u srsly saying he is that much big prodigy? And also he says smthng abt him hating prodigies as they r like young masters but i know from past experiences he will also turn into one. 3. Srsly provide proper details on how he is training one thing if u are going to make it a slow paced ff
Your story felt lifeless. Emotions are not properly displayed and the background is shaky at best. grammar is decent but storytelling is very bad. It felt like a time loop every chapter with slight differences. Overall a very boring read.
Shameless 5 star author here This is my first tale, so my grammar may not be perfect, but I hope to improve my writing quality with each chapter. Also, please provide me with comments, both positive and negative, since both are equally helpful to me. :)
Well I read upto chapter 9 and what can I say, the first few chapters were good but then the chapters just looked a little copied and pasted. Every chapter was the mc got more familiar with his magic and got 500 mana and then a status sheet which was like 70% of the chapter which continues until chapter 7. The whole system is backwards to the usual gamer system style. Which he can only level up using his points which he only gets 0.5 a day. Also all the working out and practicing/reading does nothing to contribute to his stats which if you was doing martial arts, practicing sword skills and magic along with reading day in day out you'd expect an increase in stamina, strength and intelligence at the very least( or is this just me?). The author doesn't explain the system at all, he doesn't mention that the mc can only gain levels by spending his saved points and doesnt explain how many points are needed per between levels? does he get exp? is there a store function? No information in the chapters I read regarding this which for me makes the story boring and uninformative. (Again my opinion)