Elementaris

Right, at the moment this novel adapts the idea of elements as means of power/magic while being part in the world's fantasy system. Fans of fantasy anime especially the one involving the protagonist gradually building themselves up in terms of power and skill may want to take a shot at this. The good thing about this novel is the familiarity readers can experience. Unfortunately as much there's a lot of information going on through in later chapters, makes me wonder what exactly Indux wants to do and what are his main goals for this novel, because this will be a long story. But one of my bigger criticisms are the characters and the world itself. Characters; everyone has a unique name yes, but so far none of them really stick out to me in terms of appearance or personality. World? It takes time to fully paint the picture in a fantasy novel yes, but I was disappointed that chapter 2 gave me an info dump about the elements and Indux's family; these things could have been shown for a better picture and to make the writing powerful, instead of a long drag to read. This is the best I could give author. I hope you take the time to really build the world and more on the characters. Both of these things will gradually be shown more overtime but first impressions matter, especially in a genre like fantasy. I know you can do better. Keep on writing.