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Great novel.🙌😁 Very few grammar errors if that bothers anybody. Also the storytelling is amazing and I love the author's way of writing. Most definitely this novel deserves a nomination award at least. as long as the author keeps up the good work she has a great chance.😁👍
Great, this is a great novel. A truly descriptive world background with a good pacing, However, the character design is what is commendable, I liked how you described your MC so well to let the reader emphasize with his situation. For any readers that like the system and RPG theme this could be truly a great option. Great Job, author!
The writing is very detailed and poetic. Minor details with grammar aside, this is very interesting! Definitely give it a chance, people! I'm gonna keep an eye on this one :)
yoshhh....... this was another level of system novel, ! I was immediately hooked from the very first paragraph! Nice plot too! And the writing is so awesome! It's too detailed and imaginary, is that the right word? Anyway it's freakin good!!
SHAMELESS 5 STR REWIEW FROM A MERE PEASANT ps: I liked the novel :p
Interesting story! It remembered me of Jumanji but the plot is different and very interesting. I feel like I am entering in the game. Lol😂. Great imagination. Keep it up! I cheer you!
User of the New Life System? Readers would be so hooked with this! Synopsis is also great that could let the readers add this book to their library. Author's narration is great, I'm immersed with it. If you are into transmigration, give this a read!
If I ever decide to venture into the system cultivation /transmigration genre, this would certainly be an example to go by. Unlike other system books where everything is so fast/spontaneous, this one lets us journey along with MC in the perfect pace. World background is unique and I enjoy the pace of character development and how the story develops in general. Congratulations to you, author. You did good by it! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
The first part is literally beautiful and interesting. The descriptive writing is superb! The title is already interesting and then you read the story then it becomes much more interesting. No joke! I'll this in my library and read it for it is written by such a great fellow Filipino author of mine. Keep writing!
The first thing I liked about this story is its storyline, grammar, writing style, and choice of words. The first chapter went at a nice pace. Definitely recommend it for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉
Interesting story and writing skills i could easily understand... The main character's attitude quite wimpy at first but kinda cool at d latest.
The descriptive writing style make this book great, I think readers that are gamers could relate to this especially to the main character. I like how detail it is so give this book a read, reader.
not usually my cup of tea but the story telling is insanely superb.. the details are all laid out for the reader and i could sense that the author has put in much thought to the creation of such novel. kudos and keep writing dear author!
Great novel.🙌😁 Very few grammar errors if that bothers anybody. Also the storytelling is amazing and I love the author's way of writing. Most definitely this novel deserves a nomination award at least. as long as the author keeps up the good work she has a great chance.😁👍
Great, this is a great novel. A truly descriptive world background with a good pacing, However, the character design is what is commendable, I liked how you described your MC so well to let the reader emphasize with his situation. For any readers that like the system and RPG theme this could be truly a great option. Great Job, author!
The writing is very detailed and poetic. Minor details with grammar aside, this is very interesting! Definitely give it a chance, people! I'm gonna keep an eye on this one :)
yoshhh....... this was another level of system novel, ! I was immediately hooked from the very first paragraph! Nice plot too! And the writing is so awesome! It's too detailed and imaginary, is that the right word? Anyway it's freakin good!!
SHAMELESS 5 STR REWIEW FROM A MERE PEASANT ps: I liked the novel :p
Interesting story! It remembered me of Jumanji but the plot is different and very interesting. I feel like I am entering in the game. Lol😂. Great imagination. Keep it up! I cheer you!
User of the New Life System? Readers would be so hooked with this! Synopsis is also great that could let the readers add this book to their library. Author's narration is great, I'm immersed with it. If you are into transmigration, give this a read!
If I ever decide to venture into the system cultivation /transmigration genre, this would certainly be an example to go by. Unlike other system books where everything is so fast/spontaneous, this one lets us journey along with MC in the perfect pace. World background is unique and I enjoy the pace of character development and how the story develops in general. Congratulations to you, author. You did good by it! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
The first part is literally beautiful and interesting. The descriptive writing is superb! The title is already interesting and then you read the story then it becomes much more interesting. No joke! I'll this in my library and read it for it is written by such a great fellow Filipino author of mine. Keep writing!
The first thing I liked about this story is its storyline, grammar, writing style, and choice of words. The first chapter went at a nice pace. Definitely recommend it for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉
Interesting story and writing skills i could easily understand... The main character's attitude quite wimpy at first but kinda cool at d latest.
The descriptive writing style make this book great, I think readers that are gamers could relate to this especially to the main character. I like how detail it is so give this book a read, reader.
not usually my cup of tea but the story telling is insanely superb.. the details are all laid out for the reader and i could sense that the author has put in much thought to the creation of such novel. kudos and keep writing dear author!