Epic of Apophis

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IDislikeYuri

Is there any yuri? I dislike yuri. Since it has a harem tag please stick to actual harem and not that tr##h called polyamory. Or at least give me a heads up so I can avoid.

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Tupan

Really intriguing story with great potential. The writing quality is good although the author should check names as he sometimes confuses them. I like the mc personality although i am not a big fan of his interactions with izuku and all might. Hope there is more romance development. Great story overall, give it a chance🤘

LV 4

Miki_Marlo75

The confession seemed very painful and hasty to me, it has no development more than a couple of words that are mentioned, the story practically consists of the MC having everything convenient and being a prodigy. Without difficulty, he even jumped directly in the scale of power, as if nothing certain, they will say, it is cultivation and his past lives and that, but he does something and they give credit to his abilities.

LV 4

Demon_Noah07

Story and Everything else is solid with proper foundation and logical reasoning but the only thing lacking is the writing quality or narration, The writing quality is poor with minor mistakes which can be overlooked but the narration is so bad it feels like reading a thesis, I wont't lie the story and character design and everything else is perfect but the narration and character display is 0, you just feel like reading a script instead of a story and can't real feel connected or properly imagine it just feels like watching a robot interact, no emotional investment and I fault the author for that he did everything else properly but didn't focus or improve on narration at first you feel like it's pretty good story but after a few chapters you just feel like reading a manuscript instead of story despite being a time skip or training arcs without proper explanation or emotional development the story feels bland everything else is superb no doubt about that and I give a high rating for that but you should really focus on narration.

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Samuel_Sisno

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Superb1a

Really nice story. Looking forward tp how it developes and the multiverse tarvel bits. Grammar needs a little work but its not to big of an issue. Keep up the updates man[img=recommend]

LV 6

Heavenly_Devil

All in all, a good book. But, as the rating indicates, there’s a few issues. First- The MC’s Past Lives are always brought up in every other paragraph. Second- The Names. The author confuses them. Repeating them, causing the characters to all be called Ren(MC’s Name). Third- The MC’s personality. This issue is tied to the first reason. It’s stoic, as the author implies at least once in a chapter. All because of his past life as Pyo Wol. Or, when the author feels like it, because of his life as a Doctor. The MC’s WHOLE PERSONALITY is either tied to his past lives or because of his past lives. But, let’s be real, it’s because of his past lives.