/ Fantasy / Fantasia : Path of Empty
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(Warning: English is not my native language so be prepared for a bad grammar and etc)
First novel~ (Also I just write for fun...)
(This is work of fiction, so I don't know if there's any coincidental name, place or ect..)
A piece information about MC. he isn't evil or a good person. His actions could be considered as "Doing what I want" maybe for his amusement or his goal, so a few people maybe considered his actions as 'evil' deeds and in some other people they see him as a 'good' deeds.
The story about Reo Sinclair who appeared in the Void, There his journey will be started.
Note: Additional Tags are: Multiverse, Calm Protagonist, Multiple PoV, and load of bullshit..
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Author here~... here's my opinion about the story.... First about the writing quality, I was lacking about some terms of words and some grammar, well mainly because english is not my main language. Second the story development and updating stability. About this, I already think about the Prologue, Some Important Event and the Ending. The problems are the filler and how the story would go(because I just make a raw sentence about the story i.e : He goes to blablabla, then he met... things like that and basically they haven't evolved to a paragraph). Third is Character Design, this is related to the second.... If I count the total of the important character ... there would be roughly more than twenty... and less than ten that already have a completely personality. and the biggest problem is... mob... yes.. A MOB... Thinking about them is already giving me a headache... Their name... their personalities... ugh...(My brain hurt sh*t) And the last... world background... yeah screw them.. I was lacking in a word to describe them... Also feel free to giving me some advice...
From my opinion: For the writing I don't see a problem(few grammar error is acceptable as long as it still readable... Meh) Updating stability... It just sh*t(Since author is doing it for fun... So I could tolerate that) Story development... Creative and It's interesting(Starting from middle, move forward while revealing the past).. He have a 'Great' starting point yet declined it for ridiculous reason(Again I could tolerate that) while taking a slow step.. MC true goal haven't reveal yet... So it's Good enough for me (Well mainly because I never seen this kind development before... Still awaiting path full of surprised from the story.. hope it don't went downhill) Characters Design.. for the MC... Not too extreme(he seem like a gray type).. reasonable(I find sometimes mc action confuse me thought.. whatever).. still waiting for his backstory.. Few development in early chapter too... it's Good for me... World background (tbh I don't care about it...I just read for the interesting plot) for me it's good enough i think?.. there's some detail for some place.. Overall.. has potential, good enough for me:)
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