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"We found something that looks like it can make us some big dough in the waste lands of a forgotten world it's cold to the touch, wait something or someone is in that thing could it be the original inhabitants of te'gra ? or something else entirely."mirai tanya captain of the scavengers was sent with her crew to ter'gra a planet whose entire civilisation wiped by unknown forces,she being one of the surviving decendents of hopes to uncover the truth and any other survivors
But what she and her crew found on ter'gra was a being whose very existence could forever change their lives and the universe.
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when i started reading this book i was completely lost. as i continued reading it began to make sense, the story is very mysterious its like the main plot has hidden plots that are hidden with other plots. i look forward to more chapters of the story
The story is perfect one I love it there is some mistery in it keep up with the good work Just make sure that you update more chapters on time and very soon after the first submission
I need to update the book quickly and make the chapters longer just need some time this week to upload 2 long chapters The story has mystery lurching about it ...........,..........................................
I liked the world of the novel very much, and the novel is full of ambiguity from the beginning, so when you start reading it, you start asking questions that make you continue reading.
The author is one of the genius world novel writers ☶ the story is amazing keep it up bro[img=update] unlock more pages. It' ll mind blows the world even out of the our universe, and the waves of the novel ll meets those in the other side of the world (aliens 👾 )
It's very interesting read. The premise already got me hooked and on starting it I couldn't help but get lost reading it. The mystery, action is a perfect blend that goes well and amidst a few grammatical error it's a great read!
what a great book! Though it is still at start but it has potential. The story is good turn to a new era where everything will be taking a twist and turn. Read this book and you won't reject it. Great book author, keep up the work
Geez... The author is extremely good, I was literally confused at the beginning but the more I read further the more I found out how interesting it is... I really love the mystery in it, it's quite deep but it's superb
seriously the plot was awesome, I just had to download it and add it to my library cause I don't want to miss any chapter. it's really awesome I loved it.
Honest review: the plot is interesting and I'm not really familiar with this genre so i may be wrong but i find it difficult to understand who is talking in some parts, like the beginning, maybe describing the scene with more details? Also i suggest you to use google translate or grammarly to be sure that your sentences make more senses, sometimes there's a lack of puntuations when needed, also this is my own preference but when you write a dialogue try to imagine yourself in the shoes of the people talking, it helped me to write better dialogues like people knowing each others for a long time sould have more automatism or "codes" between themselves.
The story is an interesting one no doubt about that. I got confused at one point but managed to get back on track. Such an interesting novel.
Interesting book,I enjoyed reading and would also love to read on good work to the author....Love your book... Please don't drop this book 😉
To be honest, the concept of the story and the story plot is good, and I really like it. But because I like it, I need to point out some flaws that might affect the performance of this book. First of all, it's the presentation of a paragraph. Mixing in multiple dialogues with narrations can be quite confusing and hard to read for most of the readers, try to avoid that if possible. Secondly, regarding the punctuation, regarding dialogues again, I noticed in some chapters, you didn't include "..." for your dialogue which makes it really hard to read especially when it is a first-person pov. That's all I guess, I hope my comments wouldn't be too harsh for you, your story has great potential if you could fix some flaws in it.
It's actually a very intriguing story. It also has a touch of mystery in it. I'd love to read more. Keep it up author👍 This is going to be an amazing book.
There is definitely an improvement! Keep it up brother! Looking forward for your success! But one last thing: Make it a bit more imaginative!
God, I love the setting😘😘😘. The book is just absolutely cool. I'm definitely hooked. Would make a gdod movie.❤
I'd at I have improved from when I first started writing riding the axis. I give myself a pat on my back for such hard work I'm excited as I write the next chapters
hi here. Well the storyline is interesting and marked by a certain suspense. But understanding is difficult because of the somewhat long sentences. I mainly want to talk about punctuation. The description is a glaring example, you have to read several times to understand. It would be better to review this aspect and cut the sentences a little more clearly. Now, in the first chapter, I don't know if it was a conversation between several people (so it would be better to put quotes and describe the context of this conversation as well as its participants) and again this concern for punctuation .
The paragraph lengths should be trimmed into smaller ones. The novel also was in a script format and was not a standard one. But! it was a great reading experience. I liked the story and its pacing. Still, typos flooded several chaps though it was fine and understandable. Kudos and a job well done! [img=update]