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What happens when a war vet dies and suddenly realizes that he became a girl? With a hot body at that?
What happens if the girl remembers her past life to gain more power? Would the post-traumatic stress disorder she experienced in her previous life affect her future?
Check-in Full Dive, to see how it goes. Apologies for the grammar and the way I am formulating sentences. English is not the author's first language.
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Good read, with good character development and world building this novel is looking promising, great work author and one more thing, conversation between characters are quite good.
Definitely a nice read if you're into the ecchi genre, something the writier could improve on is descriptions and the general pace and flow of their writing. I'm not that experienced in reading things like this >.< but I do know the author has been making a lot of strides to improve!
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In terms of enjoyment, I'm really liking the story and the concept is good too. But your writing needs some editing here and there because I know what you're trying to express but it's not the correct way to write Also, turn down the swearing-in some parts because some people may find it annoying Your verbs form are wrong too in many places which makes it difficult to read the plot sometimes. Keep up the good work and yes, Those S-cups do be thicc doe
This is a super funny novel with interesting plot twists. I laughed throughout the entire read. I guarantee you will enjoy the ride. Full support for you, Authorkun.
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