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This was such an awesome read and I wish I had found it much earlier than I did today
it was written well enough for me to consider it one of the best novel if not for the part where he keeps saying he is a dragon but he is not arrogant. in fact i consider him to patient and forgiving that he sound like a saint. it just didn't sit right with me especially if dooku was his master a sith. what kind of discipline over pride do you possess to not kill or torture someone who openly insults you infront of alot of people. just because you dont want to be seen a going mad doesn't mean you cant get angry or cruel. any way this is jist my personal opinion. other may find the mc's ways appropriate. that's about my only problem so i stopped at chapter 39. good luck
Excellent book and good job completing it as most don’t. Worth the read for any fan
I have absolutely nothing bad to say about this other than jon not finding a way to leave the planet and enter the galaxy a be a potential player in star wars, but this was always meant to be a just GoT ff with certain elements of SW. I really enjoyed it , the chapters were long so while there may have only been 74 chapters...compared to most stories, it would probably be double. I would say his ability to use the force to look into the past and future may be a little op but if you consider yoda could do it too within an instant then maybe not?
He didn’t really do much his power carried him heavy. Everyone fell so easily he could Have made it more interesting bye making him conquer more lands n find new magic or somehting but I guess it was ok.
I loved it a relatively short but well-told story, a more than satisfactory experience ........................................................................
it was an honor to read this masterpiece. This is one of the best GoT fanfics out there.
One of the best GOT fanfics that I've read with an actual ending. With its own twist of bringing the force into in a modest way allowing Jon to use "magic" that dosent break the story.
Anyone know how much of the Maester/Bloodraven story lines are made up by the author? I’m far from a GOT superfan, but I don’t remember anything about those from the books or the show.
I liked it, but I wish Count Dooku was their more, maybe more star wars elements. I honestly really wish he was able to get a lightsaber even though it probably would've made the fights super easy for him if he was the only one who had one.
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Probably the best fan fic of GOT I’ve seen. Wish John Snow had actually been like this in the story. Also love the Catelyn Stark Slander. By far biggest snake in sheep’ clothings
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Have enjoyed reading this book from when Aegon was Jon Snow to finding the hologram of Count Dooku inside the cave after having enough from Catelyn to the way he handled things throughout the Seven Kingdoms along with Essos with everything that had been done along with the traitors and schemers overall liked how everything turned out in this book with it being interesting and intriguing with different plot twists and overall it catching the eye and focus of the reader and getting hooked into the book
I don't know how this has such a good rating.. The MC is extremely edgy and cringe. Not to mention he has mind control powers that go way beyond what's normal for Star Wars. That's like 'very easy' mode in GoT. If the MC uses his gifts effectively the story should be over in a few chapters. The fact that there're so many chapters means either the MC's an idiot or the author drags things out unnecessarily long.
Honestly i was surprised at this fanfic. I was just trying out different GOT fanfics when i stumbled on this one. Kudos to the author. you really did a good job. You tied together pretty much everything in this fanfic in a logical manner. well theres the help from the sith powers but that always comes with a fanfic. Thank you!
Uma das melhores fanfic dessa saga já escrita, o autor explorou muitos pontos da obra original que a maioria nĂŁo pensa em dar atenção, quem está em duvida pensando em ler ou nĂŁo pode ir fundo, nĂŁo irá se arrepender, Ă© basicamente Jon Snow acordando para vida e deixando de ser um menino tĂmido e passivo que aceita ser rebaixado mas sem se tornar exagerado, ele continua sendo uma boa pessoa sĂł um pouco mais implacável com seus inimigos, ele tambĂ©m começa a os poderes da força(star wars), algo que eu achei muito diferente e interessante.
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This was one of the better done GoT fanfics, the only complaint I came make was that it was so short. However for its length the pacing was quite good I just wish there had been a little more. All around 10/10
nice story but overpowered but good novel, excellent choice, good story devlopment and excellent choice of words
Tons of grammatical errors but the story was good isn’t too long or short. Had a few problems with incesintly calling himself a dragon and not going back for the holocron at some point but good nonetheless.
Very well done, definitely recommend if you're interested in a Fix it Fanfic with a mc who has access to the force
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This was such an awesome read and I wish I had found it much earlier than I did today
it was written well enough for me to consider it one of the best novel if not for the part where he keeps saying he is a dragon but he is not arrogant. in fact i consider him to patient and forgiving that he sound like a saint. it just didn't sit right with me especially if dooku was his master a sith. what kind of discipline over pride do you possess to not kill or torture someone who openly insults you infront of alot of people. just because you dont want to be seen a going mad doesn't mean you cant get angry or cruel. any way this is jist my personal opinion. other may find the mc's ways appropriate. that's about my only problem so i stopped at chapter 39. good luck
Excellent book and good job completing it as most don’t. Worth the read for any fan
I have absolutely nothing bad to say about this other than jon not finding a way to leave the planet and enter the galaxy a be a potential player in star wars, but this was always meant to be a just GoT ff with certain elements of SW. I really enjoyed it , the chapters were long so while there may have only been 74 chapters...compared to most stories, it would probably be double. I would say his ability to use the force to look into the past and future may be a little op but if you consider yoda could do it too within an instant then maybe not?
He didn’t really do much his power carried him heavy. Everyone fell so easily he could Have made it more interesting bye making him conquer more lands n find new magic or somehting but I guess it was ok.
I loved it a relatively short but well-told story, a more than satisfactory experience ........................................................................
it was an honor to read this masterpiece. This is one of the best GoT fanfics out there.
One of the best GOT fanfics that I've read with an actual ending. With its own twist of bringing the force into in a modest way allowing Jon to use "magic" that dosent break the story.
Anyone know how much of the Maester/Bloodraven story lines are made up by the author? I’m far from a GOT superfan, but I don’t remember anything about those from the books or the show.
I liked it, but I wish Count Dooku was their more, maybe more star wars elements. I honestly really wish he was able to get a lightsaber even though it probably would've made the fights super easy for him if he was the only one who had one.
Reveal Spoiler Probably the best fan fic of GOT I’ve seen. Wish John Snow had actually been like this in the story. Also love the Catelyn Stark Slander. By far biggest snake in sheep’ clothings
Reveal Spoiler Have enjoyed reading this book from when Aegon was Jon Snow to finding the hologram of Count Dooku inside the cave after having enough from Catelyn to the way he handled things throughout the Seven Kingdoms along with Essos with everything that had been done along with the traitors and schemers overall liked how everything turned out in this book with it being interesting and intriguing with different plot twists and overall it catching the eye and focus of the reader and getting hooked into the book
I don't know how this has such a good rating.. The MC is extremely edgy and cringe. Not to mention he has mind control powers that go way beyond what's normal for Star Wars. That's like 'very easy' mode in GoT. If the MC uses his gifts effectively the story should be over in a few chapters. The fact that there're so many chapters means either the MC's an idiot or the author drags things out unnecessarily long.
Honestly i was surprised at this fanfic. I was just trying out different GOT fanfics when i stumbled on this one. Kudos to the author. you really did a good job. You tied together pretty much everything in this fanfic in a logical manner. well theres the help from the sith powers but that always comes with a fanfic. Thank you!
Uma das melhores fanfic dessa saga já escrita, o autor explorou muitos pontos da obra original que a maioria nĂŁo pensa em dar atenção, quem está em duvida pensando em ler ou nĂŁo pode ir fundo, nĂŁo irá se arrepender, Ă© basicamente Jon Snow acordando para vida e deixando de ser um menino tĂmido e passivo que aceita ser rebaixado mas sem se tornar exagerado, ele continua sendo uma boa pessoa sĂł um pouco mais implacável com seus inimigos, ele tambĂ©m começa a os poderes da força(star wars), algo que eu achei muito diferente e interessante.
Reveal Spoiler This was one of the better done GoT fanfics, the only complaint I came make was that it was so short. However for its length the pacing was quite good I just wish there had been a little more. All around 10/10
nice story but overpowered but good novel, excellent choice, good story devlopment and excellent choice of words
Tons of grammatical errors but the story was good isn’t too long or short. Had a few problems with incesintly calling himself a dragon and not going back for the holocron at some point but good nonetheless.
Very well done, definitely recommend if you're interested in a Fix it Fanfic with a mc who has access to the force
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