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After centuries of imprisonment soma die a pathetic death.
Just as he thought it was his end. Only to realise it was just a beginning of his journey.
Soma found himself in a familiar room. At first he cannot believe it But then he realised everything is true.
He rebirth back in time where everything is just begin! Now he can change everything, Now his loves one don't have to die!
But he doesn't have a time to celebrate! Because world is about to change!
Follow soma journey and see how he will change his life and people around him.
*cover picture is not my so if someone own this picture want to remove it please tell me*
*there can be some are R-18 chapter but don't worry I will mark them, also this story will not focus in that direction.*
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So far so good. Everything is so good including the awesome storyline but i gotta say WORK ON UR GRAMMAR. O'er all u are doing good, i really look forward to read more :)
Overlooking the grammar, this writer's work is still in its infancy, his mc is a real charmer with the ladies. The plot is full of humor and adventure. Let's encourage the writer to grow and share his ideas, as his novel has the potential to be the next best thing!
the storyline was definitely good so I'll give everything 5 stars except the writing quality because I have a question what kind of tenses do you use? if you're using a present tense there are small wrongs but if you're using a past tense there us bunch of wrongs
It's definitely a good story. I like the conversations and the transition between the scenes. The only part that I have a problem with is the grammar but overall, its a good book.
The idea and the character design of the story are good. I'd like to encourage the author to improve the writing and post more chapters. Keep it up!
I know many of you have a complain about 'grammar'. It is my first novel. And my main language is also not English. So please give me sometime to correct it.
Overall the book is amazing. makes me want to continue reading. It has a sense of humor to it that keeps the reader hooked. I really like the overall plot as well very interesting to read.