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Harry Potter: An Exception Side Character
3.34 (10 ratings)
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Note :- This is my first time writing a HP fanfiction.
This is a story not about a dark lord or he wants to become an all powerful wizard or will he will have ever girl out there and create a harem,No he just wants to grow up to be very strong and survive the impending war with all of his loved ones and friends still alive and happy.
Disclaimer:- i do not own any related to Harry Potter they belong to their respective owners.
Note:- Mc x Daphne Greengass
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I haven't even finished the first chapter yet, but I have liked the story so far. It seemed like it was going to be an overpowered main character from the start, which I wouldn't have minded, but it was the spelling and grammar that got to me. I can't read a story that hasn't been edited or at least double-checked for mistakes. It makes it so hard to read, and I just end up dropping it even if I was enjoying the story minus the mistakes.
Writing is a hard task trust me I tried and so I really shouldn't say much. But the MC got OP too quickly and the grammar and spelling is bad
grammar is pretty bad, but not horrendously terrible. the main issue is the story and characters. ok so the mc... before the age of 11 (so b4 he even steps into hogwarts) the mc is the best healer in the world (Dumbledore's words) and has healed both of nevlles parents and astora greengrasses blood curse. also, he is already newt level in basically every hogwarts class. he also has an arranged marrage with daphne, and her like of him primarily comes from him saving her sister. btw i havent read past chapter 5... this is all b4 chapter 5. its just nonsense.
Sorry mate. I tried to read as much as I can but I have failed. The cringe is to much. If you asked which part is cringe, let me tell you. The moment he start to use his powers wili nili. Like popcorn but with cement and you try to eat it with air as the utensil. It's just to much to bear. TBH with you, I don't have any problem with synopsis writing style of story telling. Believe me I have read 'Harry Potter and the true Wizarding World'. The author of that story write that same way. But, the way you handle your storytelling is just cringe to me. So, I am sorry. But, have this 5-star for effort. The base for your story I good tho. And I respect that. Just work in your delivery and your writing style.
good story but:1. needs a editor ASAP2. less 11/12 yearolds kissing and sleeping around
The writing get better as the story continue. Continue the good work [img=update][img=recommend]
I don't like how op the mc is such a young age