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Arthur Smith is a only child boy that remembers a lot Neville Longbottom from the Harry Potter series.
They both lost their parents when were babies and were raised by their respective grandmothers.
The difference lies in the fact that Arthur is a early bloomer. He is the mental leader of his football team and a very respected figure in his college.
He is getting ready for a job interview when his life changes.
This is a fanfic of Harry Potter. The MC is transported to the body of neville Longbottom, two years before his entrance in Hogwarts. What changes can he possibly change to the history?
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BRILLIANT! This is really awesome and sounds very promising I love Neville Longbottom. Neville always had so much potential. I have always thought Neville is one is the most interesting “side” characters of Harry’s world. And Pls DONT STOP HERE
Muito bom. HermionexNeville....................................................................................................................................................................................................
A creative and intriguing premise! I like that he's Neville in another life, rather than a completely new person taking over a body. One of my favorite things about this novel is that it emphasized: the HP books only show a limited view of the world, through Harry's eyes. So there are more complex relationships and underworkings that he doesn't know about behind the scenes. For example, after Voldemort killed off a lot of the world's former largest magic community, what would have happened to them? Other magical powers would certainly be eyeing them. The last stand at Hogwarts wouldn't be the end of it. With only 9 chapters so far, we haven't seen much yet, but the main character is smart without being overconfident. And the original characters from the book aren't treated one-dimensionally or just mentioned in passing. They have actual personalities. So try this out! It looks like a really promising HP fanfic, especially when compared to the rest. Plus, a more confident Neville is definitely something to see. :)
GREAT START BUT AUTHOR MISSING IN ACTION I WISH I COULD SAY MORE ABOUT HOW WELL THIS FANFICTION ABOUT HP WORLD AND NEVILE BUT M.I.A. IS NOT A GOOD THING,,, HOPED FOR GOOD READ BUT THE CLIFT WAS TOO HIGH AS THE AUTHOR NEVER CAME BACK
Another great novel dropped 💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔
This is now dead. Author M I A and precieved to have AWOL. MP have sent the police to apprehend suspect. Suspect still at arge. Suspect is armed and owns over 60 chapters to us . Bounty alive : 888 spirit stones . Dead, +1 review for next couple days
Very good, could have some extra chapters ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This fanfiction is awesome. It has all the things people are looking for in a Harry Potter fanfic. The author is able to understand that you need to create a background first and you see that in the first few chapters. If the author bring the book far enough it can be more then just a Harry Potter fanfic, it can be a combination of many different types of books.
Any chance you will not drop this one and continue any chance there will be a continuous wave of chapters you intent to publish anyway like your fanfic pls keep it up 👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The way he was introduced into this world was intriguing and surpassed my expectations by far. I'm hopeful that the rest of the story doesn't fall short. Please take your time to ensure quality work.
.................................. the novel is very good I love hostory..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is really awesome and sounds very promising. muito interessante, seria muito bom se já tivesse uns 100 capitulos.-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Brilliant shame you dropped it, I only read 1 chapter due to knowing its dropped. The meet of Hermione granger. I'd happily read it if its picked up again
such a good story ....but is it dropped ???author alwayes said there will be 5 chapters in a week roght??? anybody has any kind of information about it??? such a shame thou
it is not bad i like how the mc is nivell it is new keep going i hope you dont drop this it is very good so far 😊i will leave dots here so i can post this)...............................
I like the story so far, but the thing that keeps nugging me is that the last chapter came out 2 months ago, Author, pls return and keep writing this awesome story you have develope!!!!!
Avdran (AUTHOR): I have an outline of the next 4 chapters, but this Quidditch issue still leaves me unsatisfied. As the title suggests, I really have no good idea what to do to make Harry become a seeker in his first year at Hogwarts. I feel like pretending an accident is kind of lame. I don't want to do that. So if there is no chapter tomorrow, that is the reason. I'm not satisfied, but the day after there will be two chapters If you have a good suggestion, I'm open to ideas! Thanks for your support! Boread (reader): Dear author, where is the chapter, you said there will be chapter after that day. So sad.
I will shamelessly review myself. First, WRITING QUALITY: 5 STARS I know I have just an okay writing quality but it should be a goal for me to improve my English. I have to encourage myself, you know? Hahahaha. STABILITY OF UPDATES: 5 STARS It should be okay, 5 chapters a week is a promise I can fulfill. It may be more in the future. But I'm writing between 1500 to 2000 words per chapter. That is tiring enough. STORY DEVELOPMENT: 5 STARS I'm really enjoying writing the novel and I will bring a lot of new developments to it outside Harry Potters books story development. CHARACTER DESIGN: 5 STARS, For now, I just created a few, because some already existed in the books, but I believe people's character are a set of all the thing they live in their lives. So as I will be changing some events and happenings, character design will change in relation to the books. World Background: 5 STARS, For now, more than character design, it should be the thing I deserve less stars, but as I said, there will be a whole new World Background outside Harry Potters books background.