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Harry Potter: Beyond the Parselveil (Multiverse)
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He died saving a child—an end too soon for a boy who had already lost everything. But instead of oblivion, he awakens in a grand hall before a being who calls himself God.
Offered a second chance, the boy is reincarnated into a new world, chosen by the Wheel of Fate. His destination: the Harry Potter universe. His gifts: a rare Ritual Talent and a mysterious artifact known as the Celestial Gourd.
His memories will return at age eight. Until then, destiny waits—and a serpent goddess’s parting gift may shape not only his fate, but the world he’s about to enter.
-world 1: Harry potter.
- World 2 : GOT.
- As you may have seen, the story is a little AU.
-Harem from HP and from GOT.
- The MC will be a good guy and will be kind to the golden trio. And will make the people around him stronger.
- I welcome any suggestions and feedback.
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Well you wrote some good story but there's a suggestion you said harem is not realistic in harry potter world then why not go for polygamy just change the word and accept everything I am not saying make a harem of 10-20 girls just 4 were more than enough for us luna Hermione and gabreal and flaur delacor this is enough to satisfy each and every reader out their
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Writing quality: Many things to improve, though author followed some suggestions I gave in chapter 78 for chapter 79 and the result is impressive, going from 3-3.5 stars to 4.5-5 stars. Updates: no idea, I binged read the novel. Story development: Interesting emphasis on Ritual and not exactly following the Harry Potter canon. If there were things to improve on that end, I'd say the story feels a bit rushed, flying through the years at Hogwarts a bit too quickly. That's my opinion, though, so take it with a pinch of salt. Character design: Interesting. From what I've seen, enemies aren't one dimensional villains who can't learn (Except Voldy, but then it's Voldy). The MC isn't the edgy genius kind, but instead is a true good guy. Not naive, though some actions of his seem a bit naive, his age explains his reactions. After all, kids are kids and novels with a 10 years old thinking and acting like an adult is ridiculous. The parents are pretty much the perfect parents you could wish for, and the MC's friends are true friends. No useless drama between them. World background: Well, that's the Harry Potter's universe with some twists. There are also Hindu's Gods in there. I won't spoil more than that. My opinion: a feel good story about a MC being grateful for having been reincarnated into the HP's universe with some gifts. If you enjoy reading about a humble and kind MC who can still kill some horrifying monsters when needed, then it's the story for you. I recommend.
This is rushing way too much, with just a little bits of amazing potential shown here and there without actually getting into details. Of course, this is just my personal opinion, but I am dropping this due to frustration it has caused to me in the 50 or so chapters I have read.
This is one of the most good fanfic who mixe god and wizard. I hope that the author would not drop this.
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probably one of the best fan fix I've read in a long time, it has true true original content and new ideas love it keep up the hard work
Nice ff overall, though the writing maybe need a polishing and seems childish sometimes. Interesting take the Hindu Mythology, but I would have preferred a western one (Greek or Norse) so we could have stayed more in theme: starting with Chaos who could have initiated the transmigration to maybe Hecate as the guardian goddess of Magic (or Frigga/Freya if Norse)
Just finished Chapter 55. is a great Story. So far it’s good, I do recommend giving it a shot Keep up the great work 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The main draw of this story is the author’s OC. In fact, the canon Harry Potter content takes second stage and the general trend is remarkably consistent despite the MC making numerous changes to the plot and the personality of some of the main cast. I’m not saying I agree with every choice the author makes as I’m a little disappointed with the depth of supporting characters, especially those outside the OC additions. Well, the MC is also the beneficiary of divine intervention to the point that most of the story seems to revolve around him becoming more and more incredible. 😮💨 Despite the shortcomings I enjoyed the 50 or so chapters I have read.
So far it’s good, tho may meed a little editing here and there (misspelled words time to time but not a lot really). And honestly it’s my ocd that causes me to be a bit annoyed in general about mispelling, but also early in morning when typing this, and have it not gotten sleep yet, so…I don’t have the patience to keep reading right now at this very moment. But I plan to continue reading later, which shows despite small mistakes, it’s easy to bypass them to read it with how good it is. (Honestly too tired to push past my ocd rn is main issue…so yeah. I do recommend giving it a shot even if I’ve only read as of right now few chapters. Keep up the great work Author. And don’t worry about small mistakes at start, worry only after getting big enough, only then one should worry the most in my opinion…(tho thats small mistakes…not those big ones some authors do))…anyway like I said, keep up the amazing work! Don’t give up on it…it’s rare nowadays to find good books after all. Let alone decent ones to read, ones as good as yours…yeah. Please don’t give up. (At least until you run out of ideas and can’t come up with anything…at which point better to end then turn a masterpiece into a horrorpiece as some have…)
It's a great Story. I World recomend you give it a try. I really like it and although I rarely write reviews this one deserves it wholeheartedly.[img=recommend]
Just finished Ch 27 and the book is great so far. Some great additions and changes that will effect the story to come. Small issue of some spelling and a little confusion around the house elf on its gender. It was female at Diagon Alley but then it was male later on. Looking forward to see if the M.C. will share his new knowledge to improve Wizarding Briton or hold back until the government gets more competent.
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Shameless review from me. - I am trying my best and giving my time to the fanfic because I want to improve my writing skills. - I did tell you guys it will be a no-harem and changed my mind after I made it a multiverse fic. I see how some of you may consider it lying and I apologize. - Some first few chapter are sometimes hard to get through but I believe I have improved, I urge you to check out the further chapter and get a fell if you like the style or not. - Please leave reviews and comments I read them and appreciate them.