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Heaven defying lottery system ; Trapped for 1,00,000 years !
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A young man is died and gets reincarnated with a heaven-defying lottery system.
Daily free 10 Rare draw
Daily free 1 legend draw
During his first draw, he gets space-time in prison and mistakenly traps himself inside of it.
No matter how much time passes inside or outside it's just a second
luckily he can get daily draws inside of Spacetime prison.
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Boom!
Come out of prison after 1,00,000 years with max cultivation and skills outside the world it's just 1 sec.
“ Haha I am invincible "The man proclaims
I am a newbie at writing so, please wait till 30+ chaps I will slowly but surely increase my writing skills.
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#sect leader
#sect building
#world creation
#R18
#Harem
#cultivation
#school of life
#Anti Anti-hero
#villain
#world fusion
#multiple said people
#op mc
#0 losses
#beautiful female lead
#Op female lead
#loyal subordinate
#sect building
#Nine heaven world
#different world
#modern technology
#future technology
#supernatural
#magic
#loyal female lead
#No ntr
#Mob Mc
#threesome
#Milf
#system
#Eye power
#domon
#angel
#Dungeon
#god
#fuck Saitama
#Countering Mc, antagonist.
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Why try to have other male characters besides the MC in this story if the enemy isn't right, but this? It's too much male friend interference Try and he's not who he's just his friend's son his father Then the MC also doesn't know him, why did you bring him? I'm Confused That This Novel Is And I'm Lazy To Read What It's Like And also the grammar is a bit messy so lazy to read it bro. Good Luck Brother Because I'm Lazy To Read If There Are Male Characters On The Way Novel Harem Story Don't Be Offended Yes If I Drop This Novel Bye Brother Good Luck Brother Write it And GOD BLESS YOU BROTHER AND KEEP SPIRIT BROTHER
I don't wanna discourage you by giving 1-2 stars ಥ⌣ಥ But your start was kinda meh! ╮(─▽─)╭ But i see imorovement . your story isn't that bad either but your grammer and words are confusing some times . ಠ_ಠ ... Can you make babies like balanced character with little development . I also say do not rush story, you can focus on babies now after they are little strong as you say you can Send Mc to upper world for sect development ♡´･ᴗ･`♡ . Alao what with 6 wives 9 concubine and 420 maids ??? But i say it's okey. if there are more You will never be bored (⌒_⌒;) - Master oogway.
confusing story where the MC is trapped in his own world and even after so long I do not see any special thing about him. after so many rewards MC is inductively using any and he just changes the world without exploring his previous one. I'll see the author had an imagination but it was a bit exaggerated as multiple system users coming in and out every single day.
Well you have a good idea about the novel but there are many problems with this. First is the info dumps if it was just every once in awhile it be fine but 3 chapters in a row are large info dumps. Second you can read the sentence but the sentences are clearly badly written. Third it is to rushed from the start. Fourth some of your ranks in my opinion are mixed up. Also your MC who is he what's MC name there isn't much character building but I will chalk that up to less than 13 chapters are available to read.