Help! I Fell in A Well and Now I'm in an Alternate Universe!

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Dummybeing

Two chapters are less but it wasn't enough to stop me from writing an early review! The writing style is really good and more than that is the story itself! You will be hooked and will want to read more! Highly recommended! So Author, open you machine and start typing!

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FANIR

I would give this story five stars! Is this like, falling in love with your own Doppelganger? 😅This is the first time I've read a story like this, my fingers unconsciously kept scrolling down, and I said 'aaw' when there were no more chapters.The grammar is so beautifully written, I'm glad a story this good won't force my brain to work twice as much because of the messed up grammar. Keep it up, Author! 🤗

LV 3

diane_koneyy

Such a good read! I only started reading it but it's really interesting. Hope to finish reading it soon.I love the plot and the idea of how she gets transported to a new universe. I 💯 recommend soooo good!

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de_writer

Okay so it's only been three chapters and I'm already loving the whole concept of this story. I'm excited to see where this is going and how the two will interact when Olivia gets out of the well. Overall, great story Threya. I shall continue reading

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Kiss_melani

More updates!, I can't stop reading this interesting story. Nice plot. I can't wait to see Oliver's payback.

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DaoistOwlfN8

Hello I am done reading your story. I am not a huge fan of alternate universe theme and genre but this is exception. The intense drama from 1st chapter and the unexpected plot and storyline. Worth to read, no more than a worth to read.

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vorlefan

[Tip/Review] It only has 3 chapters, so its hard to grasp the story and the development. However, there are some points that would be good to watch over and review it later. Writing Quality: It has some problem with some sentences and how they're structured. For this, I would recommend you to check over some book known for their dialogue quality, like The Name of the Wind. Don't need to read it all, most likely the first pages to get a gist of it. Story Development: It lacks a structural flow to follow up. Its important to have one, because its the thing that holds the reader and creates connections with the story's character. I would suggest to study some tv-show, of its made. Character Design: It lacks inner-though and description of themselves in the scenes. Its important to write and give some emphasis for this, because it will make easier for the reader to grow some feelings for the characters, be it anger (the bullies), empathy (the mc), curiosity and so on. All in all, keep up the good work :)

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CoffeePrincess

Whoa! The plot is really interesting and caught my eyes! It’s well written and enjoyable, at the same time creates empathy within the reader for our FL! Waiting eagerly for more, a round of applause for the author 👏

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arandomeperson

Not many chapter so far but keep it up! The story begins by depicting a helpless girl being bullied which reflects a common modern problem. It gets more exciting later on but for now theres too lil chapters lol. anyways give it a try!

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Solastius_Seena

Wow, the novel is so great XD the writing style, the comedic banter between each of the characters, and the plot, all of them are really great and interesting 💕 good job author!

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ProPug

20th review yay, but seriously, great read! an interesting premise, with very very layered characters in the mix! give this a read and you won't be disappointed! keep up the good work and catch this while it's hot!

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SeraphWedd

What a way to start the story! It was a little confusing at the start, and repetitive, but a great read nonetheless! There were a few mistakes here and there, but nothing that could greatly hamper your reading experience. This is definitely a book worth reading~! 😎👍 Great work, Author! And more chapters~!

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MrFay

as expected from my fav FL writeranother banger, loved the concept and plot it's really unique and interesting, I loved how the start was only 4 chapters are out so far and I'm literally addicted to it can't wait for moreeee! keep updating threyaaaaa

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yourfriendsteve

My Fav WPC Entry of this Time So Far, I hope this wins!story is unique unlike those dumb CEO romance novels out there, I am loving it keep updating please!

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daddysukuna

Looks like I just found a great Gem, this author is Soo good with words!! I loved every single para of this book, there are only 4 chaps! and I really really want more of em!please please keep updating I'm loving it!!!

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LemArWolf

I like how it made me confused at first but then It all made sense on the last chapter. Looking forward to read the next update! 🤣

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redlady

I wish to be there protecting the FL ....send me the location ! ...I think is gonna be a weak to strong theme . Is gonna be interesting to see Olivia grow and what kind of twists the author is having prepared for us ...I am waiting for more updates ! Keep up author ! The writing style is easy to understand , it has details balanced well with interesting dialogues . Well done !

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YeshuaH

I was pleasantly surprised to find that the book is quite smooth and exceptionally well-written. Your ability to create a captivating narrative made me feel comfortable while reading, even though it's not my favorite genre. Your talent as an author is evident. Keep persevering and producing more remarkable works!

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Nuella1100

Wow🥰 this is awesome❤️💙 I'm loving this already, especially for a start, I honestly can't wait to read the rest of the story. Way to go sweetie🥰🥰

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Evelyn_Reed_151

𝐘𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲 𝐛𝐥𝐞𝐰 𝐦𝐞 𝐚𝐰𝐚𝐲, 𝐢𝐭 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐬 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞 𝐚 𝐦𝐨𝐯𝐢𝐞 𝐢𝐧 𝐦𝐨𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧. 𝐄𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐲 𝐬𝐜𝐞𝐧𝐞 𝐡𝐚𝐬 𝐥𝐢𝐟𝐞, 𝐝𝐢𝐫𝐞𝐜𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐟𝐞𝐞𝐥𝐢𝐧𝐠. 𝐈 𝐜𝐨𝐮𝐥𝐝𝐧’𝐭 𝐡𝐞𝐥𝐩 𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐢𝐦𝐚𝐠𝐢𝐧𝐞 𝐡𝐨𝐰 𝐚𝐦𝐚𝐳𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐢𝐭 𝐰𝐨𝐮𝐥𝐝 𝐥𝐨𝐨𝐤 𝐚𝐝𝐚𝐩𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐢𝐧𝐭𝐨 𝐚 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐢𝐜 𝐨𝐫 𝐰𝐞𝐛𝐭𝐨𝐨𝐧. 𝐈’𝐦 𝐚𝐧 𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐢𝐬𝐭 𝐰𝐡𝐨 𝐬𝐩𝐞𝐜𝐢𝐚𝐥𝐢𝐳𝐞𝐬 𝐢𝐧 𝐯𝐢𝐬𝐮𝐚𝐥 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲𝐭𝐞𝐥𝐥𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐦𝐢𝐬𝐬𝐢𝐨𝐧𝐞𝐝 𝐂𝐨𝐦𝐢𝐜𝐬, 𝐖𝐞𝐛𝐭𝐨𝐨𝐧𝐬, 𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐀𝐫𝐭, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐁𝐨𝐨𝐤 𝐂𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐈’𝐝 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐡𝐞𝐥𝐩 𝐛𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐥𝐝 𝐭𝐨 𝐥𝐢𝐟𝐞 𝐯𝐢𝐬𝐮𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲. 𝐈𝐟 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐬𝐨𝐮𝐧𝐝𝐬 𝐢𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠, 𝐥𝐞𝐭’𝐬 𝐜𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐨𝐧 𝐃𝐢𝐬𝐜𝐨𝐫𝐝 (𝐮𝐬𝐞𝐫𝐧𝐚𝐦𝐞:𝐄𝐯𝐞_𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐬𝐞). 𝐖𝐢𝐭𝐡 𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐩𝐞𝐜𝐭, 𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐥𝐲𝐧