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What will happen when kyline attracts the attention of a high tier vampire
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It’s ok, pretty good start! Chapters are short (I understand, writing is hard) but maybe you could combine chapters together and just do that. The writing quality. Ma’am, I am not trying to offend you in any way but I think that you should proofread before you post it. It has many grammatical errors, and I recommend you get a friend to read it to make sure that there aren’t any mistakes in it. I will update this review to a better rating if the chapters are longer (or put together) and the quality improves. Keep up the good work! :)
Nice start! A vampire romance with a human plot can develop in many ways. The first 12 chapters are very interesting. Keep up the good work!