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Hoyoverse - The Demonic Swordsman
Honkai Impact First
(P.E)
In the immersive virtual world of Honkai Impact, where players take on the roles of valiant warriors battling against the mysterious force known as the Honkai, a strange occurrence alters the fabric of reality. One day, amidst a routine gaming session, an unassuming guy named Aeolus finds himself inexplicably pulled into the game.
Through a mysterious cosmic event, Aeolus is transmigrated from his ordinary life into the body of a child within the Honkai universe. Struggling to come to terms with this bewildering turn of events, Aeolus must grapple with the duality of his memories from the real world and the child's experiences in this fantastical realm. With the knowledge of his past life still intact, Aeolus possesses unique insights into both the challenges and opportunities that await him in this new world.
Along the way, Aeolos forms unexpected bonds with the in-game characters, including the ramen loving Kevin, the stoic Fu Hua, the snek Mobius (Especially Mobius) and more etc.
As he embarks on his odyssey through the Honkai world, Aeolus's true mettle will be tested. He must master his powers, make heart-wrenching decisions, and confront the ultimate source of the Honkai's malevolence. Along the way, he will question the meaning of his transmigration and the purpose it serves in the grand tapestry of existence.
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Write a reviewFirst thing first I'd like to say is to take this review with a side of salt as I am not a native English speaker nor am I creative enough to write a story and I have only read up to chapter 7.This story has a fun concept as long as you're aware of honkai lore (it would probably be a little harder to understand what is going on without knowing it though the story just started so that can easily be explained over time).The writing itself is understandable and I haven't seen any obvious grammar or spelling mistakes.My only real problems with this story is how things that are already explained are repeated over and over again (like the butler's loyalty or who he is in general) and that everything feels over described (if that's a thing). There are descriptions for almost anything and it feels like it ruins the flow of the story.
Pretty good, definitely has potential. Though the dialog and inner monolouge are to long and talk in circles and certainly saps the enjoyment and motivation to read another sentence, if it just repeated a rephrase version of the pervious phragraph like three times.
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Synopsis impressed me enough to actually make me wanna read the novel... please don't drop this author
I will review this properly after chapter 30 release if I'm still reading this then. For now here's some boosts in rating for new author. Good luck author.👍
Author Judgement_Bonk
Its my story after al uwu 5 starrrrssssss 69