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Traveling through the Dragon Ball world, Kahn became Kakarot's big brother. When Planet Vegeta was destroyed by Frieza, he was sent to Earth by Burdock.
But because Kakarot is a low-level fighter, Kahn's combat effectiveness is not strong.
In Ai 761, the system that Kahn had been waiting for for a long time finally appeared.
But the prerequisite for the system to activate is to marry a woman.
So through the introduction of a matchmaker, Kahn took a wife who is all over the country.
His strength is skyrocketing day by day, and his wife is also gentle, virtuous, and considerate.
Kahn's life is gradually getting on the right track.
This year, the Gods of Destruction Beerus descended on Earth.
Kahn looked at his wife who slapped Beerus for seconds, and was shocked!
"Honey, are you really Angel Vados?"
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Write a reviewCool concept but utter trash when the author literally copy and pasted it "previous chapter next chapter advertisement" are literally still in there. Mixes uncle and brother up. INLAWS are called grandma. Mc know whose Vados is but still looses all his IQ and forgets. Like he turned on 10x gravity with her in the room and was surprised when he was still standing there and when she fell down in horrible acting he was extremely worried. It's brain dead to the max. Also there alot of Chinese phrases that just don't make sense. Like "horse riding vados" when he firsts meets her. The author has no self respect to just copy and paste. Probably just wants people's stones when applying literally no effort.
Ni siquiera te das la molestia de editar o quitar la palabra anuncio, y la historia no tiene mucha coherencia xd...............................................................
Author, I know that one shouldn't judge a story after the first chapter, but mine are rather doubts mixed with questions with a couple of criticisms in the middle. So below are listed my doubts, my questions and my criticisms in points ๐ 1. Is your fanfiction yours or have you translated it from a fanfiction by another author on MTL โ๏ธ๐ I ask you because your story features the same grammatical error as the exchange of generalities that occurs in MTL stories. 2. the MC will change his personality by becoming more confident and less BETA in his romantic relationships โ๏ธ๐ I ask you this because the MC seems more like the passive part of a relationship than the active one and it is partly due to this character trait that he ruined his relationship with Bulma though not completely because he was FRIENDZED๐ ๐๐คฃ. 3. will the MC learn to use his brain or will he continue to remain stupid for the rest of the story โ๏ธ๐No, I ask you and I say because clearly the MC has intact memories of his previous life and cannot think that in world of Dragon Ball there are at least a dozen methods to become stronger quickly even without the help of a system ๐คท๐คฌ๐ค๐ฉ๐ In short, I understand that it is needed for the plot of the story, but Son Goku wasn't satisfied with Raditz as a waste of older brother; now we have to add the MC too ๐. However, once all this has been said, it should be added that Vados is there to save the story ๐๐๐ even if the excuse that due to a premonitory dream she ends up getting together and marrying the MC seems like a far-fetched excuse, but who am I to criticize a choice inspired by Dragon Ball Super and Beerus' premonitory dream.
author the story line is good just some fine refining.........and change some words in your sentences......... your making it obvious it's written by a Chinese .......
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just read the mtl this one is just a copy and paste with zero changes