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The eyes are our primary source of information for everything.
There are so many things that I haven't been able to accomplish. I wondered to myself... if my eyes were just like the others' eyes, would I be able to see?
But neither did they see...
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Write a reviewOther than the very few grammatical errors this is written pretty well! I like the direction it’s going and the details so far. I’m looking forward to how this develops!
This is my kind of genre. Fell in love with this book right from the beginning. I would love to read more. Can't wait for the next chapter. [img=recommend]
I really like how the descriptions are constructed and how the MC feels. I hope you don't dropped it ........................................................
I really liked how it started off. Looking forward for more chapters. In love with the lead already. Keep up the good work and keep updating.
cliche but i like it **************** **************** ******** ******** ******** ******** ******** ******** **************** ******** ********
I already said this in the comments, but I'll leave it here, the chapters are too short. try to do at least 2k words. but even so, the story seems interesting, it has just 2 chapters, but I liked it!
I really liked the tone of the book!!! It's interesting how the author describes things, I can really create an image in my head [img=recommend]
I really liked the beginning, I'm looking forward to Ledo's development now that he has a second chance. I'll be waiting for more chapters.
Reveal SpoilerAuthor RubyKing
Like any good author without shame, I'm going to review my own book kkkkk I had started writing this book on another account a LONG time ago, just the beginning, but I deleted it! Wuel.. This book is my private world; I always think about it when I go to sleep or when I'm bored. This book started when I had to design a Visual ID as a TCC. (TCC is a course conclusion project that the graduates need to finish at the end of college, I don't know what it's called in other countries, hahaha) For this project, I created a fictional game and had to make the game's background. That's when the embryo of this world began to be born, and I started to think about this world a little bit every day, even after finishing the project. I'm not saying all this for you to think it's good, hahaha; it's just to let you know that it was my private world for a long time. Before, I tried to share it, but I deleted it because I wasn't comfortable. Now I want to try sharing it again. It might go bad, but I hope you enjoy the journey.