I Punch the Tailed Beast Ball

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ShifuLong

I will never understand why they never choose tsunade as a love interest. It is considered one or otherwise the most beautiful of the Naruto anime more Tsunademore Tsunademore Tsunademore Tsunademore Tsunademore Tsunademore Tsunademore Tsunademore Tsunademore Tsunademore Tsunademore Tsunademore Tsunademore Tsunademore Tsunademore Tsunademore Tsunade

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Lasyandra

i already read this till chapter 264.. the MTL is not that bad.. well as a veteran who always read MTL, i can easily understand it.. dunno about you all....

LV 5

DeathXMaster

Is this another Chinese asexual MC? Is there any chance of romance or is he going to run around finding different ways to strengthen Konoha while meeting notable characters?

LV 4

Krishnbarad

This fanfic about a wannabe-chad young master in Konoha is as dry as Kakashi's hair after a hot springs trip. Cardboard characters flail around like Naruto at ramen time, and the MC's Whitebeard power is about as useful as a rusty kunai against a Biju. Skip this dusty scroll and rewatch Naruto Chibi – you'll get more laughs and less cringe.

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wisdomkeeper

This is not bad , can't complain about grammar tho [img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend]

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Aryan_9085

Great strory .

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Saksham_Chandel_7041

I love it 😀 [very much like the one piece of the legendary doctor who is the best husband ever ch22 in the world of the legendary doctor and the best of luck in finding the right fit to your story needs a lot more stones than the other brands that are used in this case is the process]these words are only for fulfilling 140 characters limit

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Ansura

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------Its a good translation, though i hope author updates more ------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Rickyson

mudança na hora de falar o nome do MC ficar alternando entre "Nagasawa" e "Fujiawara" e muuitoo ruim confunde e corta o animo na hora de ler, algumas nomenclaturas de alguumas coisas nao foi corrigidas continua com termos chineses e isso confunde muito o leitor, de resto a tradução esta muito boa.

LV 3

jhesus_curtus

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LV 5

LifelessMan

Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work

LV 4

NeilllJohnnn

it's really good .,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.

LV 3

Eaindray_Khing_Zin

Very enjoyable plot i love the warmness of it it is very sweet and sugary to read hahahahahaha

LV 1

Diego_TG

Good novel. Good mc personality, not kind and not evil. Good history of characters. Good background. And good writing quality (not mtl lol).

LV 12

Kakashi_3194

This story is so great that you will be left mad and wanting more chapters all I can say is be patient or cough up the money on P@treon this is definitely in my top 20 fanfics with the greatest plot

LV 3

Yanir_FP

All I can say this is simply a masterpiece bravo I really hope the MC will try to change the events in the future and that includes Naruto and Sasuke and the way the system is used is amazing too and I really hope in the next template it will be first hokage hashirama and I was very surprised that kakashi will become a dad too I don't know if it's going to be kirn or someone else but hopefully it will stay the same and I have to say those challenges are really interesting of seen what could have happened in a different way and I really hope you will continue this and continue doing an amazing job may God bless you and may God bless this novel

LV 1

Cyber_Kholiq

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LV 13

Daoist_CloudySky

I am absolutely loving it. keep the chapters rolling🙂👍