Infinite-Possibilities: Beginning of All Ends

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VexedMartyr

Let me begin with Writing Quality, a few spelling errors most likely typos, i notice how you are trying to be as descriptive as possible which does work but i think it could be better, also the pacing of events could use some work. otherwise i think its quite well done. Stability of updates, well 2nd chapter just dropped on time so i can trust the updates will come out as planned unless something comes up. Story development, chapter 2 does coherently keep the attention on the main topics and themes at hand during chapter 1 and does capture my interest according to the events even though pacing may be a little lackluster but its good enough for now since its just the beginning. Character design, cant say much on that as i haven't seen enough on them but i definitely see some potential there in all the characters that have been present as of now, just the typical children. could lead into the child prodigy tropes but we will see. World background, the world building could improve but it mostly stems from the writing quality, and its still early chapters so cant give a very satisfactory critique as of yet. Overall i think there is alot of potential in this novel and im looking forward to future updates.

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leoreview1

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