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The author is unable to keep a steady flow. He is unable to stay on track with story you will be bombarded with fillers and lots of chapters just repeat what was said the chapter before. Even after over 200+ chapters the main chapter still can't beat a level 10 boss. The author has no clue as to what he wants to do with the story which is sad because it could have been a decent novel.
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I really wanted to like this story, but it's not for me. I really loathe all the side characters and all the PoV shifts, it makes the story unnecessarily hard to read and follow. I just don't care about most of the side characters and it just becomes filler. I have probably skipped about 30 % of the chapters to get to chapter 116.
good story good world building nice charecter development the only thing that drags the whole novel is snail slow pacing there are lot of unnecessary extra chapters and arcs are overly extended even if it's not needed otherwise the story is good and has a lot of potential ;)
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honestly he story is neither good neither bad, I should say average. The story go like I like to say Chinese style, dragging and putting many useless thing to make more words/chapters. we're at 400chapters and the mc is lvl 15 and the average of the server is around 10/12. a boss is around 20 to 40 chapters with always full people coming like ants. Even the simple act of putting items to auction took 4 to10 chapters cause a full band of "stupid Youngs masters" come to drag more where a chapter would have be enough (well honestly we could do without since it was just non sense and useless). the story could be way better without all this dragging every fight with void. I really hope that you can reduce a lot the CN style to have a good pace of your story
I haven't yet started resding but I'd like to ask if there is romance or harem before starting to read. usually even if there is no harem but just romance the story focuses too much on the romance when the story isn't even mainly about that romance
I usually do not write reviews but this book is the worst on video game genre I have ever read.This Author really sucks in telling stories.You do all the things that would prevent anyone from completing this ?Novel. 😤🥵🤮💩
very good, i'm really enjoying the characters, i think there will be a lot to explain in the future, both about the MC's friends and the other guild members, keep up the great work
The book was fun to read. I liked the main characters of Sato and Fudo. I don't really like Snow Goddess and her god complex, she calls herself Snow Goddess for heaven sake, it would have been fine if it was people calling her that.
Generic, but fun. The author completely admits this and doesn't pretend his work is something special just because it got popular. Out of respect for their humbleness, I'm giving this 4 stars.
READY PLAYER ONE Japan version. Love the story background and settings. A bit of LOG HORIZON elements to make this art more captivating. Thumb up.
It is one of the best novels that I have led so far, the development of the story, the world, the character, is going very well, I just hope it continues like this and there is no object that makes it more OP than everyone else. I read just 30 caps
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Lost interest on chapter 118, to many different side character chapters that i basically skipped over them. Not enough MC development chapters like for his sub-class or anything really, which i would rather read about then other (insignificant) character POVs. Who shouldn’t even have so many chapters to begin with.
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I always love the concept of a virtual reality novel. But the popular ones so far pisses me off and irks me, The first few chaps were a lil confusing and I feel like author missed a few words or sentences that were absolutely needed for the smooth transition of main character but aside from that alls good. Hope author keeps up the great work.
Well to be honest first chapters were annoying to read as understanding became bit difficult till the chapters I read story pacing is bit slow not like everyday cliche has bit realism to it. I liked the fact of t/n notes sometimes funny though sometimes annoying😅. At least author is considerate of readers explaining Somefacts. Well keep it up man hope to see this novel getting updated. Well for other readers atleast try it see if it's your cup of tea though it's Definitely mine. Well iam not good at writing reviews. Well I will try to edit it after reading
The author is unable to keep a steady flow. He is unable to stay on track with story you will be bombarded with fillers and lots of chapters just repeat what was said the chapter before. Even after over 200+ chapters the main chapter still can't beat a level 10 boss. The author has no clue as to what he wants to do with the story which is sad because it could have been a decent novel.
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I really wanted to like this story, but it's not for me. I really loathe all the side characters and all the PoV shifts, it makes the story unnecessarily hard to read and follow. I just don't care about most of the side characters and it just becomes filler. I have probably skipped about 30 % of the chapters to get to chapter 116.
good story good world building nice charecter development the only thing that drags the whole novel is snail slow pacing there are lot of unnecessary extra chapters and arcs are overly extended even if it's not needed otherwise the story is good and has a lot of potential ;)
Good day! You’re one of the writers that I found admirable because you write great sytem/game stories and you’re able to connect to your readers through writing. I love how you strive in writing and your behavior is something we look up to. I am reaching out to you because we feel that you worth our Offer. If you are interested, kindly reply here, click my profile and look for my e mail and I'll discuss everything with you.
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honestly he story is neither good neither bad, I should say average. The story go like I like to say Chinese style, dragging and putting many useless thing to make more words/chapters. we're at 400chapters and the mc is lvl 15 and the average of the server is around 10/12. a boss is around 20 to 40 chapters with always full people coming like ants. Even the simple act of putting items to auction took 4 to10 chapters cause a full band of "stupid Youngs masters" come to drag more where a chapter would have be enough (well honestly we could do without since it was just non sense and useless). the story could be way better without all this dragging every fight with void. I really hope that you can reduce a lot the CN style to have a good pace of your story
I haven't yet started resding but I'd like to ask if there is romance or harem before starting to read. usually even if there is no harem but just romance the story focuses too much on the romance when the story isn't even mainly about that romance
I usually do not write reviews but this book is the worst on video game genre I have ever read.This Author really sucks in telling stories.You do all the things that would prevent anyone from completing this ?Novel. 😤🥵🤮💩
very good, i'm really enjoying the characters, i think there will be a lot to explain in the future, both about the MC's friends and the other guild members, keep up the great work
The book was fun to read. I liked the main characters of Sato and Fudo. I don't really like Snow Goddess and her god complex, she calls herself Snow Goddess for heaven sake, it would have been fine if it was people calling her that.
Generic, but fun. The author completely admits this and doesn't pretend his work is something special just because it got popular. Out of respect for their humbleness, I'm giving this 4 stars.
READY PLAYER ONE Japan version. Love the story background and settings. A bit of LOG HORIZON elements to make this art more captivating. Thumb up.
It is one of the best novels that I have led so far, the development of the story, the world, the character, is going very well, I just hope it continues like this and there is no object that makes it more OP than everyone else. I read just 30 caps
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Lost interest on chapter 118, to many different side character chapters that i basically skipped over them. Not enough MC development chapters like for his sub-class or anything really, which i would rather read about then other (insignificant) character POVs. Who shouldn’t even have so many chapters to begin with.
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I always love the concept of a virtual reality novel. But the popular ones so far pisses me off and irks me, The first few chaps were a lil confusing and I feel like author missed a few words or sentences that were absolutely needed for the smooth transition of main character but aside from that alls good. Hope author keeps up the great work.
Well to be honest first chapters were annoying to read as understanding became bit difficult till the chapters I read story pacing is bit slow not like everyday cliche has bit realism to it. I liked the fact of t/n notes sometimes funny though sometimes annoying😅. At least author is considerate of readers explaining Somefacts. Well keep it up man hope to see this novel getting updated. Well for other readers atleast try it see if it's your cup of tea though it's Definitely mine. Well iam not good at writing reviews. Well I will try to edit it after reading