I have to say I cannot give you the best of stars due to it being a relatively new series, however, i feel that the chapters are incredibly short and their length should increase. You did not really explain much about the MC's background and we do not know much about how the main character wants to develop the story line. I believe chapter 1 should have explained the world and his path and then start the story line. Example of this is when he is born. It basically just goes 'hey I'm born', 'hey i just became an orphan' the next line. More info than that needed please. Other than that, this story has a lot of potential if you take the right path with the MC.
I have to say I cannot give you the best of stars due to it being a relatively new series, however, i feel that the chapters are incredibly short and their length should increase. You did not really explain much about the MC's background and we do not know much about how the main character wants to develop the story line. I believe chapter 1 should have explained the world and his path and then start the story line. Example of this is when he is born. It basically just goes 'hey I'm born', 'hey i just became an orphan' the next line. More info than that needed please. Other than that, this story has a lot of potential if you take the right path with the MC.
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