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Joh-El, the firstborn son of Jor-El and Lara Lor-Van, and Kal-El's older brother, after sending his younger brother to a distant planet on the only escape ship the family had, found an ancient chant with instructions to open a portal to somewhere.
Unfortunately, due to some complications, this portal became unstable and sucked Joh-El and his dog Krypto, to an unknown place, a strange planet called Earth, but that planet was in the Marvel universe.
[A Superman and Marvel fanfic.]
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I was already tired of authors doing Fanfics on Superman in MARVEL and making it boring, I'm glad you showed up and started making an interesting story like this, KRYPTOOOOO!!!
The story itself is half assed at best and it feels more like an outline for a story than an actual story Our mc is a kryptonian and lived on krypton for 14years but doesn’t know how his powers work and he’s the single worst kryptonian in any universe or timeline, he’s got 0 battle sense, 0 common sense with not researching his new world, he stands still while getting shot and actually is so pathetically weak that normal pistol bullets penetrates his skin
I get tired of the whole pet companion thing along with the whole born as a twin or brother of the main character it's stupid and the majority of people don't like it, it's less annoying then the whole tsundere girl cliche though
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sometime i wonder whether the people that keep giving 5 stars read the same fanfic i did... this fanfic is average at best.. read to chapter 9 if it wasn't for the title and author mentioning it i wouldn't know i was reading about an kryptonian raise in krypton for 14 years... all i see is a normal human kid with some strength and speed power thats all..
Interesting way to have a Kryptonian MC in marvel, can't say much more without reading the futur chapter. For now 5 Star --------------------------
Man please dude no harem in this story please...... ..... .....have to reach 140 .... .......... .............................. .......... . . ........
Looking forward on this one!!! Yaaay .... ... . . ~~~~~》》》》》》》》》》》》》》》》《》》》《《》《》》》》《》《》《》》《》《》《》》《》》》》》》》》》》》》》》》》》《》》》》《》《《《《《《》》》》》》》》》》《》》《》》》》《》》《
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I implore you! Never give up this fan fiction! I implore you! Never give up this fan fiction! I implore you! Never give up this fan fiction! I implore you! Never give up this fan fiction! I implore you! Never give up this fan fiction! I implore you! Never give up this fan fiction! I implore you! Never give up this fan fiction! I implore you! Never give up this fan fiction!
I'll be objective. Quality of writing: readable. Updates stability: Daily. Story development: In a pleasant rhythm, without rush, without take too long. Character Design: Not innovative but still good. World Background: Good development so far.
So, 1 star is troll and 5 star is good. Even tho both are fake, you just delete the bad ones so you have good rating for your story. 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
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Good stuff overall, it’s a nice Superman based fan fic, all the characters are generally likeable and it was nice that the author was using some characters that aren’t seen as often (like gambit). Update schedule is pretty nice as well.
I like the idea of this story it very creative and it have lots of potential and i hope i can expect a great things for it in the future keep up the great work author
Very good story. More please. Very good story. More please. Very good story. More please. Very good story. More please. Very good story. More please. Very good story. More please.
I found it intriguing; First of all, the creativity of placing MC as Kal-El's older brother opens up the possibility of visiting the DC world in the future, which I'm looking forward to and hope you won't disappoint me when you do. Secondly, the calm pace of development has attracted me a lot, as the MC is obviously getting stronger with the chapters, but not to the point of ruining the plot and making the story uninteresting in the process. Third, I want more chapters!!