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    A man with spiky golden blond hair and a sharp orange tone right eye and icy blue left eye, woke up on an island with strange giant beast and almost no memory. He has memories of strange world, martial art, weapon and a name but he can't remember anything else. Will he survive in this world where the strong rule over the weak? ****************************** Disclaimer: I don't own any of the work shown in this novel, they are the property of the original owner this novel is writed only for fun.

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    Hello everyone, I am here to show you an example of story to see if it's good or if its just garbage... If it's good I will TRY to write it if not I will just abandon it. It is the story of Neo a 'human' created (he is the incarnation of the void) by the void at the same time as the world is born Year after year Neo observed the different timeline and world in the many different Universe until God's began to ascend (cultivator, religion, etc) and created their own world or space and universe until he was bored and decided to travel the different world and timeline The MC will look like a young Xenmas (17/18 years old(Kingdom hearts go google it)) with pale white skin as the only difference of the original and the organisation XIII uniform He will have power over darkness, space, time, and the void (which can be considered the main elements and the 3 other as the sub element of the void) His weapon will be a Keyblade, the same as sora/roxas and King mickey but with black handle, dark grey guard and a grey blade (if we can call it a blade), it can cut anything since it use the power of space. So what do you think? And sorry for the many mistake, english isn't my birth language.

  • Kokutō Saga

    Kokutō Saga

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    A man wake up without memory's of himself in hell in the body of Kokutō[1], knowing he is not in the best situation someone could be in, he needs to escape Hell and find at which time of the story he woke up, how to use the power of the Togabito[2], who he his and how did he come to a world that was fictional for him until now... [1]: Bleach 4th movie, Bleach: Hell Verse [2]: Sinners, Offenders Disclaimer I don't own any of the original story (characters/world/lore) English is not my birth language so if you see any errors don't hesitate to tell me Kokuto x ??? (still don't know, no Harem so don't ask) First Arc: Bleach Second Arc: ??? (still don't know I was thinking of Naruto to obtain more diversity in technique or swordsmanship)

  • Idea for a Marvel Universe

    Idea for a Marvel Universe

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    Hello I'm just here to give an idea of story since I don't have time to write it (I'm writing Kokutō Saga right now) but this idea was in my brain for some time now and it's more of an homage than anything... It's to celebrate the coming of 'Sly Cooper the series' this year. Do you see where this lead? No? Then keep on reading... So you all know Rocket Racoon from the guardian, but what if a Fan of this raccoon was also a fan of another one... What if this fan was given a chance to transmigrate/reincarnate in marvel with some wish... What if is wish were to be reincarnated has Sly Cooper with the thievius raccoonus all the unique techniques of his ancestor and all they're weapon... So that's my idea if someone wish to take it please do so if you don't like it... I don't know, just keep doing whatever you were doing...

  • Dragon Ball M

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    A man died during a street fight and found himself in a new body with memory which are not his, trapped inside a strange space with many crystal showing the story of a world he never though really existed... ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Hello, I'm just here to say everything will not be the same as the original, some part will be other will not! Hope you will like it! This story is inspired by 'Broly The Saiyan Of Legend' by Draugzel, go ahead and read his amazing work! ------------------------------------------------------------------------ I don't own Dragon Ball all right go to they're respective owner

  • The Onmyouji Incredible Journey

    The Onmyouji Incredible Journey

    Anime & Comics Reincarnation OC Strong MC Sword User Omniverse Travel Onmyouji Eye Power Multiverse Travel Previous Life Knowledge Onmyouji Magic User

    A man died without knowing how only to appear in a black room with three word floating before him. Reincarnation: Normal -> Special -> ****************************************************** I don't own any of the world, characters and power shown in this novel except for my MC

  • The Ärm Master

    The Ärm Master

    Fantasy Sword User Dimensional Travel One-Shot TYPE MOON xxxHolic Ärm User Ärm Creator MÄR Eyes Power

    One Shot Shiki Nanaya, a reincarnated individual without power dropped in an alternative world where people of the Moonlit World use magecraft and magical item, saw a mysterious Japanese style house which seemed to exist only in his eye, intrigued by it he choose to enter it. After entering it he was guided by two girl introducing themselves as Maru and Moro who guided him to a woman who introduced herself as the 'Dimensional Witch' who explained she was waiting for him as a favor for someone, giving the knowledge of Ärm creation as well has the power of Dimensional Travel saying the price was half paid for these but he needed to go search for some special materials and object in other dimensions for her in order to pay the rest of it. Now armed with knowledge of a power with infinite possibilities and a special power he will live is life however he want while collecting what the witch tasked him to.

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Mr_Laughing: Yeah, I'll most likely end up using that one.

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Scareraven: Cool because it's my favourite

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Weqqy: Thanks for the chapter

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Insert_Name: Thanks for the chapter and for darkseid’s daughter are you talking about grail or a OC?

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Weqqy: Exp

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callylloyd: cant wait for moreXD great start of a storyXD

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CDR_Grae: Hello! I'm sorry it's taking so long, I'm still writing and editing it 😅 but perhaps Sunday at the latest, so please stay tuned! ^^

The Goddess of Death · C9
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When can we expect the next chapter I have the sensation of waiting for more than a month when it's only 2 weeks...😭😭😭 View More

CDR_Grae: Thank youu so much for reading! Yes, it's a good thing Hela caught onto that so quickly, because it would've become worse if she didn't. And about Lucas, I suppose you'll just have to wait and see ;) Thank you again! ^^

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Scareraven: See this! I just gifted the story: Ring

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MartialArtist: When are the new chapters coming out <3!!!!!!!!!!!!

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hiddenkard: It was great to see the way she caught on to things about her friends and sorted it out promptly. Also this Lucas guy...friend or foe hmmm...I really hope his a foe lol

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CDR_Grae: Thank youu so much for reading! Yes, it's a good thing Hela caught onto that so quickly, because it would've become worse if she didn't. And about Lucas, I suppose you'll just have to wait and see ;) Thank you again! ^^

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11myownroad11: I'm reading this chapter for the 5x time 🤣 it's always so good. Your prose and characters are so spot on. Hope Heimdall saw Hela, this is probably the incident that sparks Odins war, isnt it?

(Just figured out how to comment on this app, go figure)

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GoKoTo: gracias por el capitulo.

How to survive in the World DxD with Fragment Memories · C17
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KonekoLover: Thanks for the chapter

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Scareraven: The potential was wasted because the majority of author take the anime as a basis not the novel (or manga if there is)

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How to survive in the World DxD with Fragment Memories · C17
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BackgroundAnon: It's not bad the story but after reading 100 chapter of romance that they forgot the main story, then return for a couple of chapter only to go back to the harem... It make Vahn into a full Gary Stu that have all the girls at his foot. Even if he is nice to everyone and do what he can for all of them.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
2 days ago

ences: The premise of the story from start till the harem comes, and all it did is the same, the story dont progress much, but the author say this story for himself to challenge his writing skill, for the future project tho

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
2 days ago

Xoft: Sooooooo, hmmm. Truthfully speaking, i don't even know what to say 'bout tis novel.(hopefully the devil author won't show up when i say his name). From the other reviews about the slapped harem genre i can say that it's rather true. They gave rather vivid descriptions and right know i don't even know wether to start reading or not.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
2 days ago

Randomguy791: Reincarnation! not just any reincarnation but reincarnation into fictional stories of manga and novels! that alone got my interest. The prologue was well written as it gave us background info on our main character. It felt cringy to me with this god/goddess stuff that many isekai type of story does to justify reincarnation but that is just me - other people might like it.

So what has really lowered the points for me is the system. In my opinion, the system has way too much personality that it bothers me. I don't expect it to be a mindless robot that executes commands but this system our main character has basically spoon feeds him anything and everything. Main character has already lived a life of imprisonment and knows nothing of the world. He wants to be free and experience life and feeding all the information to him seems counter productive. I believe the system should only be relevant if main character desperately needs advice because right now, he isn't making his own decisions as he goes by what the system recommended of him.

The second area which lowered the score(not by much but still enough to be relevant) is the pace. Main character goes from weak status -> s and ss rank status in a matter of a dozen or so chapters. Of course, the premise of the novel is world hopping between fictional works so the main character can enjoy a free life so I can understand the need for MC to power level through the current setting and move on to the next but the pace is still quite fast. This also intertwines with relationships. His harem is building up way too damn quick. For someone who lived a traumatic life in a lab with no past relationships, I expected him to be wary of others and take time to open himself up before engaging in a relationship.

All in all, I like the setting although the execution of the story is weak with a few flaws after the great prologue. I might be understanding of the flaws but it doesn't mean I have to like it hence, the not so great score.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
2 days ago

aguy: The first 100 chapters were fine. A few bits that made it obvious author was finding their feet with the writing, pacing etc. A good mix of character growth, leveling up, fighting, etc. Pretty much what I was expecting.

But then. Oh dear god. It's almost like the author's bad-romance-obsessed twin took over or something. A *hard* veer into pure fluffy harem land that's lasted about a full length novel. Holy cow. It's the literary equivalent of trying to finish a bottomless chocolate milkshake. Nice when it's accompanying a good steak or burger, but after a while you get a brain freeze and go into a diabetic coma. That was about 30 chapter ago, and it *just won't stop*.

Not to mention, the harem just keeps growing. I'm not sure why the author has the MC trying to go the Solomon route (1000 wives and concubines) but that seems to be the case. So instead of legit character development with some sort of defined story-arc, it just blends together in this repetitive merry-go-round of dates, fooling-around, and an occasional bit of (not very good) emotional drama. It's like watching a bad soap-opera. I have no idea why or how the author thought this might be a good idea, beyond possibly catering to a patreon base which can't pick a best girl (or three-five) and instead gave us *this*.

When it's harder to keep track of your characters than in George R.R. Martin's ASoIaF, you've messed up. We passed that territory dozens of chapters back, and *just kept going*.

After a while, it looked like the author had recognized that problem and was going to (finally) bring things back in to the story I started reading. Even the characters were discussing how this story-line had become the literary equivalent of a cultivation novel's heart-devil. But no, it was just an excuse to focus on *yet another* "best girl".

I'm also unsure if the author has spoken to a girl. I'm not exactly the moral champion of monogamy, but poly relationships are like chemistry; any reaction which requires more than three individual (molecules) coming into contact at a time gets *very* improbable, and adding people is an exponential issue rather than a linear one. In other words, finding the right(ish) girl? 1 in, say, 20. Two of them? 1 in 400. More? How much are you going to strain our belief...

... Not to mention scheduling issues. Even if they double up they'd get less than a night a week. Love's not an assembly line, and if you think it is I shudder for any partners you might have.

At this point, I'm scrolling through, hoping to find the end of this interminable harem bonanza before my patience with the story evaporates entirely.

I am impressed by the sheer quantity the author has managed. But perhaps a bit more thought into the story itself would keep the quality a bit higher. The author is capable of it, or at least managed a full novel's worth of it. By sheer fluke seems unlikely, but I wouldn't dispute it if someone said it was written by someone other than the more recent parts. I'd like that first part, the part that's kept me going through chapter after chapter of this rom-trash, to come back.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
2 days ago

Dens88: I am having a real time continuing this story, it is frankly boring and super cringy. Almost every chapter I end up cringing, this novel seems more suited to a young audience rather then anyone with any amount of maturity... rather then action and a struggle to grow and improve it seems like everything just falls into his lap, especially women.

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2 days ago

RQS67: Dropped @ chapter 201. The story started ok and at a decent clip, however the story turned for the worst @ chapter 93. Vahn (the MC) de-evolves from a “broken and naive” lab test dummy into a sexual deviant (lust test dummy). I had hopes for a steady climb from the muck, but found myself disappointed. Many of the mature women are portrayed as cheap sluts and then a gothic loli is introduced, sheesh. If you’re into the sexual escapades of a 14 yr old minor with an 18cm shlong. This story is for you, enjoy.

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2 days ago

Djabilong: It was actually really, really good for a good chunk of it. But the story steadily devolves into harem and not the good kind - way too many characters involved (around 18 last time I've checked, and only about five of them are interesting and compelling characters) with the boring ones greedily eating up screentime of both the good ones and MC; at a certain point MC's spine get surgically removed and he embarks on an endless quest of being a manservant boytoy to pretty much anyone, fully forgetting why he came to the city in the first place as he allows his wahmen overlords to push him around as "I-know-what's-best-for-you-now-do-as-I-say".
Still, the writing is great, I'd go as far as saying that fanfic's quality was actually far superior to the original for the first 150 chapters or so before it got off the rails. More than worth the read up to that point.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
2 days ago
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HaremQueen: I do have to admit...that’s childish. Maybe the person had a lot of time on his hands.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
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Spider_Girl: Dear author,

you are nothing but a hypocrite and a whinny baby who doesn't like it when someone says something bad about you or the story. you are as much a p*ssy as your own character.

This story is nothing but a p*ssy of an mc who is only chasing after p*ssy. The entire story is extremely boring and slow enough for a turtle to go across the world before it goes anywhere. The mc stays as a weak b*tch who is pushed around by every single woman he meets. Every woman in the world of DanMachi better hide, because the almighty author isn't going to spare any of you if you look even a bit attractive. she's only 12? add to harem. she's got a husband? add to the harem. she's pregnant? add to harem. she's 50 years old? add to harem. she's got F cups? add to the harem. she's flat? add to the harem. she's crazy? add to the harem. she doesn't want to be in the harem? add her anyway.

p.s. the author keeps saying that the story isn't "action" based and nobody should complain because there is no tag...well check again f*ckface, there's a tag that says "Action" now. can't use that as an excuse anymore.

Sincerely, Spider-Man.

Warning: if you say "incorrect", you are gay.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
2 days ago

ottospens: what can i say... really good first 100 chapters, then 200 chapter of disappointment, u could skip them with out lossing anything, till chapt 300+ all you will read is a "cry me a river MC", internal monologues, some PG 18+ chapters and "0/nada story progression".

The novel had some potencial but well like most harem novel got lost in the 30+ girlfriend our savior/demigod/well packed/upperamaizing MC got just because...

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2 days ago

Zyvers: This is my first comment and im the type of reader that usually stays silent and create an account for the sole purpose of reading. I know that author would probably critizise me (like seriously i have read some of the bad reviews and none of them is heartfully accepted by the author which kinda ticks me off since most of what they write is kinda true or similar to what i have in mind).

So moving on to the reviews, like most people said it starts off quite well in the first 100 chapters but quickly goes downhill as girls quickly fall for him for no apparent reasons (except for some of them), probably the moment they met tiona, aiz and others from the loki familia. I understand if its only Tiona since she is an amazon, but for the others like aiz to fall for him so quickly is kinda inconsistent with their canon characteristics which kinda disappoints me. It also disappoints me that author makes all the notable girls in that world to fall for him and makes the story terrible as there are too many girls falling for him and making the story goes out of hand. Moreover, since vahn is still in his first world i can’t imagine how bad it will be when he goes to other worlds and have all the girls throwing themselves at him like whores and taking all the notable girls within that world like danmachi ones.

I think author has some talent for writing action since the action scenes are really quite good in my opinion so i think its a shame for the author to drop the action and focus solely on slice of life. Author also have good writing skills and grammar since they are easy to read and understand with only very few mistakes.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
2 days ago

Player0709: This novel is really nice for the first 100 chapters but things start to slow down. Like a lot. Taking it in comparison, the first 50 chapters the MC spent a few months surviving but after chapter 100+, each 25 chapter only 1 day seem to pass. The timeline makes absolutely no sense. I appreciate the storyline but not only does it progress slowly, the MC is a regular annoying hero that helps not just 1, not just 2, but 10 too many people for the reason that they suffered some kind of trauma. This may sound cold-hearted but the MC does not realise that he is in a different world where it’s the “survival of the fittest”. Hence, his harem just gets larger and larger and the author has to write more just to include all the characters. Even then, some characters get pushed out of the frame such and welf and bete, appearing once or twice in 200 chapters.

Do keep in mind that we are in the first world so far....danmachi. What will happen when the MC moves on? The MC himself will probably get his “freedom” be another prison as he would probably be not willing to leave danmachi and his harem, making “the path” kind of meaningless since he would only be in one universe and not be travelling to other manga/anime/novels.

Overall, good read but the typical blind stupid naive idiotic hero surrounded by his harem. I actually hope that his entire harem dies just so he can move on to the next world and not worry about as much people as he did...

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
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