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really good but the grammar kills it needs a proof reader dont use coins on it
do not read this absolute thrash 4 years since the first chapter and no grammar has been fixed this looks like the worst MTL you could imagine, any review above 1 is fake or a bot
you can't get through the first chapter due to misspelled words and poor grammatical structure.
Please help me review and find flaws and also suggest ways to improve the story. Book=> Twilight Emperor: Dark and Light (Search full name in the search bar. :-)
too many cliches the first girl basically trow herself at him like in not even 12 hours the grammar is so trashy that some time there are some worlds missing like "it is, he, she, is like... etc" if you want to read this novel you have to become the 1/100 author of this novel for deducing all the worlds missing and have to go to the doctor for mental issue for how cringey and cliche it is
from what i can see after reading up to chapter 300, it appears the concept of impregnation is nonexistent to these women who end up sleeping with Ye Chen for the first time. it's not like they go in sleeping with him knowing they won't get pregnant because he is turning his sperm into potent yang qi, they only find out after when he explains it to them. so these women knowing allow him to unload into them for the first time without care for getting pregnant and that just strikes me as an odd flaw. I also see from the wiki page Ye Chen doesn't have any children, meaning he has never gotten anyone pregnant and I feel that these women who claim they love him so much should want to have his child, but have yet to conceive. I hope the author gives Ye Chen some kids as that will give him something else to protect besides his women
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
strongest ,powerful,smart,loveable Mc nice fantasy story. 👌 go and read it it's good
I like this novel, truly do. The plot caters perfectly to my tastes in webnovels and it even has a truck load of chaptersso I’m very satisfied, but the author obviously doesn’t speak english so the grammar is abysmal and it gets better (slightly) but only after the first 200 or so chapters and not many have patience for that so I believe the author needs to edit these chapters before continuing or the novel is never gonna get the love that I think it deserves. Seriously the only problem is the terrible english in the beginning parts otherwise it’s wonderful.
first thing: forgive me, my english is badits good novel, i really like it, after 2500CH that i had readgood thing: "nothing one night stand"so all harem continue grow up with MC, "action is also good" coz mc no fear to death but.............. bad things: "MC less killing", so some problem came back to MC, its better if MC kill anyone who provoke MC, and "grammar in beginning is too bad", but after a few chapters, it's going a good grammar
Repeating sentences very often "this is not too much, this is an extraordinary strength" Ye Chen said to Chu Yuechan. Ye Chen told that this is an extraordinary strength. With this, Ye Chen was able to gain extraordinary power. "I think this will be difficult to learn" Chu Yuechan said to Ye Chen. Chu Yuechan said that this would be difficult to learn.
Author more chapters, I like this novel and am very excited to see Ye Chen powers while he is getting stronger. So don't Stop novel , if there is any personal problem and you aren't able to upload chapters atleast give some notice ahead so I don't have to worry for nothing and can wait.✌️
STORY IS GOING WELL AND DEVELOPMENT IS GOOD BUT YOU SHOULD ALSO WRITE ABOUT ALL OF HIS WIVES ( FROM ZHAO YANYAN TO CURRENT LOVERS )WHEN THEY MEET OR HOW IS THIER TRAINING IS GOING ON .OTHERWISE IT FEEL LIKE HE IS NOT CARING HIS WIVES WHEN HE COMES IN SUPREME GOD REALM AND JUST WANT TO PURSUIT POWER AND NOT CARING ABOUT HIS BELOVED.WE KNOW YE CHEN IS DOING WHAT HE WANTS BUT ATLEAST SHOW SOME DEVELOPMENT AMONG ALL OF HIS LOVERS.✌🏻😉
I like the story and it's amazing, the character development and overall environment is very commendable of how development regarding MC and all other people regarding his family, or friend are presented perfectly and I am still reading this Novel and still will read until it's ending. STILL ENGLISH GRAMMER IS UP AND DOWN STILL STORY IS GOOD.😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋I REQUEST YOU FROM MY HEART ❤️ TO NOT DROP OR PUT ON BREAK ANY OF YOUR NOVEL AND KEEP GOING.🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻I HOPE YOU FOR GOOD HEALTH AND WEALTH TO KEEP WRITING FOR FANS LIKE ME FOR READING " JOURNEY TO BECOME A TRUE GOD".
The story is good I like it ❤️✅ Just that the editor ✍️ keep explaining line it’s annoying
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Hey Author 🙂, Can you increase chapters for release maybe to 20 chs/ week, if possible .I like this story and excited to read what will come next in story.
you can understand the story because the words are so mixed up it seemed like it could be a good story with some editing
The poor grammar ruins the entire novel, good luck trying to understand any of the novel its awful. I read mtl raws and this is worst.
Add Lou bing to harem !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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really good but the grammar kills it needs a proof reader dont use coins on it
do not read this absolute thrash 4 years since the first chapter and no grammar has been fixed this looks like the worst MTL you could imagine, any review above 1 is fake or a bot
you can't get through the first chapter due to misspelled words and poor grammatical structure.
Please help me review and find flaws and also suggest ways to improve the story. Book=> Twilight Emperor: Dark and Light (Search full name in the search bar. :-)
too many cliches the first girl basically trow herself at him like in not even 12 hours the grammar is so trashy that some time there are some worlds missing like "it is, he, she, is like... etc" if you want to read this novel you have to become the 1/100 author of this novel for deducing all the worlds missing and have to go to the doctor for mental issue for how cringey and cliche it is
from what i can see after reading up to chapter 300, it appears the concept of impregnation is nonexistent to these women who end up sleeping with Ye Chen for the first time. it's not like they go in sleeping with him knowing they won't get pregnant because he is turning his sperm into potent yang qi, they only find out after when he explains it to them. so these women knowing allow him to unload into them for the first time without care for getting pregnant and that just strikes me as an odd flaw. I also see from the wiki page Ye Chen doesn't have any children, meaning he has never gotten anyone pregnant and I feel that these women who claim they love him so much should want to have his child, but have yet to conceive. I hope the author gives Ye Chen some kids as that will give him something else to protect besides his women
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
strongest ,powerful,smart,loveable Mc nice fantasy story. 👌 go and read it it's good
I like this novel, truly do. The plot caters perfectly to my tastes in webnovels and it even has a truck load of chaptersso I’m very satisfied, but the author obviously doesn’t speak english so the grammar is abysmal and it gets better (slightly) but only after the first 200 or so chapters and not many have patience for that so I believe the author needs to edit these chapters before continuing or the novel is never gonna get the love that I think it deserves. Seriously the only problem is the terrible english in the beginning parts otherwise it’s wonderful.
first thing: forgive me, my english is badits good novel, i really like it, after 2500CH that i had readgood thing: "nothing one night stand"so all harem continue grow up with MC, "action is also good" coz mc no fear to death but.............. bad things: "MC less killing", so some problem came back to MC, its better if MC kill anyone who provoke MC, and "grammar in beginning is too bad", but after a few chapters, it's going a good grammar
Repeating sentences very often "this is not too much, this is an extraordinary strength" Ye Chen said to Chu Yuechan. Ye Chen told that this is an extraordinary strength. With this, Ye Chen was able to gain extraordinary power. "I think this will be difficult to learn" Chu Yuechan said to Ye Chen. Chu Yuechan said that this would be difficult to learn.
Author more chapters, I like this novel and am very excited to see Ye Chen powers while he is getting stronger. So don't Stop novel , if there is any personal problem and you aren't able to upload chapters atleast give some notice ahead so I don't have to worry for nothing and can wait.✌️
STORY IS GOING WELL AND DEVELOPMENT IS GOOD BUT YOU SHOULD ALSO WRITE ABOUT ALL OF HIS WIVES ( FROM ZHAO YANYAN TO CURRENT LOVERS )WHEN THEY MEET OR HOW IS THIER TRAINING IS GOING ON .OTHERWISE IT FEEL LIKE HE IS NOT CARING HIS WIVES WHEN HE COMES IN SUPREME GOD REALM AND JUST WANT TO PURSUIT POWER AND NOT CARING ABOUT HIS BELOVED.WE KNOW YE CHEN IS DOING WHAT HE WANTS BUT ATLEAST SHOW SOME DEVELOPMENT AMONG ALL OF HIS LOVERS.✌🏻😉
I like the story and it's amazing, the character development and overall environment is very commendable of how development regarding MC and all other people regarding his family, or friend are presented perfectly and I am still reading this Novel and still will read until it's ending. STILL ENGLISH GRAMMER IS UP AND DOWN STILL STORY IS GOOD.😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋I REQUEST YOU FROM MY HEART ❤️ TO NOT DROP OR PUT ON BREAK ANY OF YOUR NOVEL AND KEEP GOING.🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻I HOPE YOU FOR GOOD HEALTH AND WEALTH TO KEEP WRITING FOR FANS LIKE ME FOR READING " JOURNEY TO BECOME A TRUE GOD".
The story is good I like it ❤️✅ Just that the editor ✍️ keep explaining line it’s annoying
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Hey Author 🙂, Can you increase chapters for release maybe to 20 chs/ week, if possible .I like this story and excited to read what will come next in story.
you can understand the story because the words are so mixed up it seemed like it could be a good story with some editing
The poor grammar ruins the entire novel, good luck trying to understand any of the novel its awful. I read mtl raws and this is worst.
Add Lou bing to harem !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
best novel . I love this plot,........ ...